A Night On the Town

The esoteric couple had a night on the town.
And, wow, they were so totally wasted.

Neither aspirin nor Alka-Seltzer, will ever 
Repair the health, that both lambasted.

Nor would any marijuana do the trick!
Those fools even tried potent Thai-Sticks?


                Live long and prosper, 
                             P.Romios 
                              8/6/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 8/31/2022 2:33:00 PM
Truly original rhyming that merges with the expected hangover after a night of revelry. Your postings have much creative flair. Be well. Brian
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Date: 8/6/2022 11:28:00 PM
What a couple --- of --- ??? Takes all kinds to destroy a world, I guess...
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/7/2022 11:07:00 AM
I knew people like that! They considered themselves perfectly sane? Some got better, some died! Yes lots of crazies in the world. Panagiota xxx
Date: 8/6/2022 3:13:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, Right nor aspirin or Alka -Seltzer will repair their health. Drugs do not cure it makes their health worse. Hugs Darlenexxx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/7/2022 10:20:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, pain killers is just for pain. It is not to be over used. But there are people that take them anyways for reasons of their own. So sad. Yes Iwill pray for the users of drugs. Hugs. DARLENE XXX
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/6/2022 4:16:00 PM
A warm, hello Darlene. Drugs are much like alcohol. Destroying the liver, brain. And relationships! People do not understand alcohol is a drug.Our present President wants free needles and clean places for addicts! Hello? It’s sad. The USA is now a dumping ground for Fentanyl.as a pain killer. The number is enormous. The entire world drinks, A portion of them will become alcoholics it’s a disease!. God help them. It’s not a choice..plus pain killers are for many an addiction.Users live in denial. I have dead friends who simply could not stop. I cried at their funerals. There is ALCOHOLICS Anonymous and Narcotics Anonymous. These folks need our prayers. These groups meet.in all countries daily.the US has cracked down on pain killers from doctors. Please say a prayer for addicts each day. Hugs, Panagiota xxx
Date: 8/6/2022 2:02:00 PM
Tell it like it is my friend. Good advice is to not get blasted in the first place. :-) Have a great weekend, Panagiota. Hugs, Bill
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/6/2022 2:27:00 PM
Bill, greetings to you in Texas. People get looney at times! And quite sick…...Am waiting to see Glen Beck on CPAC followed byTrump. This can be seen on the Rumble APP in about 10 minutes..2:30 pST. Or on cSPAN 1.. Love to hear America being valued. This is a great country. Am proud of it! My family is at the Giants vs.Oakland game. Appreciate you, my Texas buddy! Panagiota xx
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