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A Night In Paris

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spires stretch heavenward in a twilight sky crimson hues and nighttime blues do battle as people lope lazily over a dusky bridge like cattle with cameras; snapping the domed limestone giant below, boatmen skim across a shimmering mirror reflecting fragmented moments cast down from the world above floating like flotsam; lifeblood coursing through the city’s stone heart amid those masses, we watched the shadows grow steadily longer and balls of soft lamplight glow gently brighter until, suspended in the darkening air they floated like no post was there then, just like that - the city shrugged off day’s last light wrapping herself in the mysteries of night where amorous wishes and twisting seine scenes led to candlelit kisses and solitaire dreams

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Date: 1/24/2023 11:50:00 AM
What a lovely poem, so much imagery. Je l'aime Tres bien.
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Marcus Whitnell
Date: 1/27/2023 3:04:00 PM
Thank you Marikate, je suis très reconnaissant!

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