A Night In Paris

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spires stretch heavenward in a twilight sky
crimson hues and nighttime blues do battle
as people lope lazily over a dusky bridge
like cattle with cameras;
snapping the domed limestone giant

below, boatmen skim across a shimmering mirror
reflecting fragmented moments
cast down from the world above
floating like flotsam; lifeblood
coursing through the city’s stone heart

amid those masses, we watched
the shadows grow steadily longer
and balls of soft lamplight glow gently brighter
until, suspended in the darkening air
they floated like no post was there

then, just like that -
the city shrugged off day’s last light
wrapping herself in the mysteries of night
where amorous wishes and twisting seine scenes
led to candlelit kisses and solitaire dreams

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Date: 6/4/2024 7:38:00 PM
Very fine imagery throughout. Tourists who morph into cattle with cameras present an effective simile - image strong. A Paris glow. A celebratory write. Be well. Brian
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Date: 6/4/2024 8:26:00 AM
« like cattle with cameras » struck me. Your imagery of a beautiful city and the life that continues within it is beautiful.
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Date: 6/4/2024 6:29:00 AM
Really like your use of imagery and the way you use form (specifically enjambement and caesura) to enhance meaning. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 1/24/2023 11:50:00 AM
What a lovely poem, so much imagery. Je l'aime Tres bien.
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Marcus Whitnell
Date: 1/27/2023 3:04:00 PM
Thank you Marikate, je suis très reconnaissant!
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