A Nice Relaxing Bath

I am taking a nice relaxing bath
At 2,000 miles a minute
Tossing buckets of water over my head,
Faster than age 2 does it,
Even letting some fly out of the tub
Because it’s funny, and it makes me laugh.
What the heck is relaxing about this?
Okay, Mom, I shall try again…
I am in a frenzy, dumping buckets of water over 
My enormously tired body, wishing the mania will
Go away after this bath, and what happens? 
I start laughing, thinking about how crazy
Dad’s relatives are.
Right, Mom?
They are all nuts,
So why would I be
Any different?
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November 5, 2019 at 2:36 AM
This is too cute Caren. It makes me think of a house full of relatives all visiting for some holiday. You are pushed and rushed to get things done and take care of everyone and your "relaxing" bath is a hurried one. Exhaustion takes over as soon as they leave and you collapse. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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November 5, 2019 at 7:38 AM
Thank you Judy.
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April 9, 2018 at 7:25 AM
LOL - cute one, Caren.
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November 5, 2019 at 7:38 AM
I am not the relaxed type.
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April 9, 2018 at 3:25 AM
Reminds me of a story I heard, As they were taking me to the asylum, I look about and realise I'm already here lol. Tom
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April 9, 2018 at 3:44 AM
Thank you, Tom. I shall dedicate the next one to Dad's other relatives. Ha!
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