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A Nice Relaxing Bath

I am taking a nice relaxing bath At 2,000 miles a minute Tossing buckets of water over my head, Faster than age 2 does it, Even letting some fly out of the tub Because it’s funny, and it makes me laugh. What the heck is relaxing about this? Okay, Mom, I shall try again… I am in a frenzy, dumping buckets of water over My enormously tired body, wishing the mania will Go away after this bath, and what happens? I start laughing, thinking about how crazy Dad’s relatives are. Right, Mom? They are all nuts, So why would I be Any different?

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Date: 11/5/2019 2:36:00 AM
This is too cute Caren. It makes me think of a house full of relatives all visiting for some holiday. You are pushed and rushed to get things done and take care of everyone and your "relaxing" bath is a hurried one. Exhaustion takes over as soon as they leave and you collapse. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/5/2019 7:38:00 AM
Thank you Judy.
Date: 4/9/2018 7:25:00 AM
LOL - cute one, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/5/2019 7:38:00 AM
I am not the relaxed type.
Date: 4/9/2018 3:25:00 AM
Reminds me of a story I heard, As they were taking me to the asylum, I look about and realise I'm already here lol. Tom
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/9/2018 3:44:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. I shall dedicate the next one to Dad's other relatives. Ha!

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