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A New World

Twas the day after Christmas and all through the land Exhausted humans were reclining... couldn't stand Putting salt in their coffee Feeling all wishy washy But happy to hear nastiness' forever been banned

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/27/2017 12:04:00 PM

Amen! xomo :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/27/2017 12:18:00 PM

However... keep your fingers, toes and noses crossed!!! LOL xxx

Judith S

Date: 12/27/2017 8:32:00 AM

That's why I come here to see you Jack. Never any nastiness! Just fun and laughs:)

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/27/2017 8:40:00 AM

Hey sweet Judith, since you started brightening up my days, a whole bright new world has opened up for this doddlin' old geezer!!! xxxxxxxx

Silent One

Date: 12/27/2017 7:43:00 AM

Hey Jack tell em shush ya mush, b4 you give em a push! Those nasty little beasts, send em to the priests. Or ya turn their brains into slush!

Silent One
Date: 12/27/2017 8:12:00 AM

I'm too nice, I just ignore them...

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/27/2017 8:03:00 AM

Takes all kinds eh but we'll remain shining examples to show em how!!! You go first...

Silent One

Date: 12/27/2017 7:39:00 AM

If only nastiness would be forever banned my friend.. some people can't help themselves..

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/27/2017 8:01:00 AM

Sometimes it's embarrassing to be associated with them as fellow humans???

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/27/2017 7:27:00 AM

Did you shop on Boxing Day?//I heard it's the Crown's kind of way//Treat the help//so they won't yelp//When they have to work on Xmas, not play. BAN ON SIR JACKIE OF THE SALTED COFFEE — UGH!!! (sounds vile, like sn**!)

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/27/2017 7:32:00 AM

Got an extended break from that sn**!!! If can believe these so-called forecasters!!!