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A New Start

A new day what a lovely start Wispy clouds touched by gold The rising sun has pure light Red 'pon the horizon moulds Indescribable beauty surrounds Uncontainable joy flows Only a few minutes to absorb Then it will slowly go_ The sun now so orange and bright Pierces through the tree tops Nature is mostly quiet_still Beauty for their backdrop A cricket's chirp, a bird's tweet A lookout crow's caw warns Take care, don't get overtaken Critters scamper or fawn Fawn definition_servilely abject Written July 17, 2014

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Date: 7/26/2014 9:39:00 PM
Sara The imagery and charming way of writing made me feel like I was right there with you enjoying this beautiful and splendid time. Thank you for the sweet comment on my Paradise poem
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Date: 7/18/2014 3:01:00 PM
beautiful write, my friend - will read more of your work ASAP - there's so much to catch up on tonight...
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Date: 7/18/2014 1:04:00 PM
Beautiful poem to start the day. Good one my dear. BG
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Date: 7/18/2014 11:35:00 AM
Lovely start ,, each brand new day,, very beautiful Sara!
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Date: 7/18/2014 8:35:00 AM
How beautiful... The sun is rising here as well....hugs Tim
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Date: 7/18/2014 7:59:00 AM
this lifted up my soul. love it!
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Date: 7/18/2014 6:56:00 AM
Sounds like a beautiful start to a beautiful day :)
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