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A New Perfume

There was an enthusiastic gent A new perfume, he tried to invent Not a grand perk For his hard work Was a cent that was sent for his scent!

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Date: 1/27/2019 6:29:00 PM

G'day Pat … surely there's another use for it like. Ridding unwanted pests - a nice use of words Pat - Lindsay

Pat Adams
Date: 1/27/2019 10:48:00 PM

You would think right?!.......80)....Thanks Lindsay!

Date: 1/18/2019 1:57:00 AM

Nice one Pat, he needs to go back to the drawing board lol. Tom

Pat Adams
Date: 1/18/2019 7:26:00 AM

Yeah, probably shouldn't quit his day job!.....80)

Date: 1/17/2019 10:10:00 PM

Good one! :)) xomo

Pat Adams
Date: 1/18/2019 7:25:00 AM

Thanks mo!........80)

Date: 1/17/2019 6:34:00 PM

Ah, there's my funny for the day!!

Pat Adams
Date: 1/18/2019 7:24:00 AM

Glad you liked it SW!.............80)

Date: 1/17/2019 5:41:00 PM

Very creative puns in the last line, Pat. Enjoyed!

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/18/2019 4:03:00 PM

Pat, you should be entering more of the limerick contests! Give Rico and Jack Horne some competition...

Pat Adams
Date: 1/18/2019 7:23:00 AM

Thank you Carolyn. That means a lot coming from you!!!!..........Glad you like it!!....pat

Date: 1/17/2019 5:27:00 PM

Very nice play on words.

Pat Adams
Date: 1/18/2019 7:20:00 AM

Thanks Arbol! I wasn't sure it would make sense....80)