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A New Nebula

"Sight of both eyes lost",... I wake up in a world of infinite darkness. My new receptors learnt to succor my woe. A shadow cast in an illusion of light, now winks and mocks my scourge. Asteroids crash deep within my citadel of dreams, and swirl in a black hole of a pit usurping a halcyon montage of images. But within deep eons of my mind, ionized dust squash together into unknown plasma. A revolving square of astral grandeur A new galaxy is born in my nebula.. Rapacious Red and Flamboyant Orange now brighten all my black to refulgent glory. Light years away in a sea of new cosmic space, I search my old love... in my new moon. Dated 12th June, 2019 Sponsor William Kekaula Contest Name Nifty Named Nebula's Picture #7 Red Square Nebula

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James Inman

Date: 10/26/2019 10:57:00 PM

I like this very much Debjani. It is much more personal than most of the others.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/16/2019 9:04:00 AM

Very apt and very sad. Kind wishes, Kai

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/15/2019 6:08:00 PM

Back with more congrats, Debjani.

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/13/2019 10:47:00 AM

Bravo, Debjani. Powerful imagery. Congrats on your win.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/12/2019 6:51:00 PM

Wow Debjani, your entry is so unique and boggles the imagination of my mind. Your creative poem deserves to be on this winning list. It is exquisite! Congratulations on your wonderful win!: ) xxoo

John Hamilton

Date: 6/12/2019 6:19:00 PM

A mesmerizing write Debjani, I marvel at your astounding lexicon, stunning word combinations, congrats on a fine placement!

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/12/2019 2:08:00 PM

Debjani, you possess a rare vocabulary, along with an uncanny ability to appropriately place words that renders all spellbound and with that, I would like to add my personal heartfelt thanks for gracing your awesome offering within this contest that was made possible by the PoetrySoup members, as a place to be solely recognized and honored by its community of fellow poets, Aloha always, William Kekaula

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/12/2019 12:26:00 AM

"A new galaxy is born in my nebula.. Rapacious Red and Flamboyant Orange" I think you have conquered this contest, my friend.