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A New Morn

Pain holds its insistence pressed against me.
I dream of a misty, selfless new morn ~
soft as maternal skin ~
easing me free with a true smile
to greet a 
sweet day born!

daydreamemotionsendurancehopefree verse

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Ron VanHooser

August 1, 2025 at 11:01 AM

CayCay, this was beautiful, may you find your dream. Keep up the great work! Ron

Andrea Dietrich

July 31, 2025 at 12:06 PM

This is fantastic work, Caycay. Big congrats and also for your win with Rob. soupmail

Paige Hind

July 29, 2025 at 9:05 PM

This has an aching loveliness. :)

Joseph May

July 28, 2025 at 4:49 PM

Greeting the day with a smile, Lovely verse

CayCay Godwin

July 28, 2025 at 5:03 PM

Many thanks ... CayCay

Trina Layne

July 28, 2025 at 7:18 AM

Congrats, CayCay! I love the line "new morn as soft as maternal skin". Well done.

CayCay Godwin

July 28, 2025 at 5:03 PM

Thank you for your encouraging comments, I embrace them. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 27, 2025 at 10:28 AM

- A wonderful new day ... without pain ... a reason to smile, CayCay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

CayCay Godwin

July 28, 2025 at 5:05 PM

Thank you, Sweetie. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Rowena Velasco

July 27, 2025 at 8:32 AM

So soft and full of feeling—love how it moves from pain to peace so naturally. Really touched me!

CayCay Godwin

July 28, 2025 at 5:08 PM

Your comments were a pleasure to 'hear' because they feel genuinely sincere. Thank you, Rowena, for sharing your reactions with me, means a lot. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Valsa George

July 27, 2025 at 5:30 AM

A lovely poem with a tinge of pain. Your deep feelings are masterfully delineated. I "dream of a misty selfless new morn soft as maternal skin" . Beautiful analogy. Congratulations on your win, dear Cay Cay !

CayCay Godwin

July 28, 2025 at 5:08 PM

Thank you, Valsa. CayCay

Sara Kendrick

July 27, 2025 at 3:54 AM

Filled with deep emotion. Don't we all from time to time wish for such an event. I hope this Sunday will be perfect for you. Sara K

CayCay Godwin

July 28, 2025 at 5:09 PM

Love the personal feel in your comments. Thank you, Sara. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Anne Winter

July 26, 2025 at 6:16 PM

Wow, dear CayCay, love this beautiful poem! The writing is exquisite and the imagery is beautiful! How mindful and deep this poem is and the way you've put your feelings into this is just beyond brilliant!

Anne Winter

July 27, 2025 at 5:36 AM

Aww thank you so much, you are the best, luv u so much <3

CayCay Godwin

July 27, 2025 at 3:21 AM

Thank you very much, Anne. Your words warm me in a cuddle (I promise I've never said that to anyone else it just now popped forth from nowhere, kind of cool, a word cuddle) Poetry hugs ... CayCay

sara Etgen-Baker

July 26, 2025 at 4:38 PM

outstanding CayCay! I love your unique take on the contest...it has the depth she's looking for...best wishes with the contest

CayCay Godwin

July 26, 2025 at 4:46 PM

I have never cast a poem and caught a keeper that quick before! I thank you for such a delightful appearance and poem enthusiasm, I sincerely appreciate both. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

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