A New Moon

A chalky moon rises, from still air, drawn on smooth, blue-black paper sky. A New Year's eve like this, seems too calm to be real, to feel nothing but peace; snow covers tree branches like fleece, yet I am warmed by a fire inside, wrapped tight in the starry glow of tomorrow's promise. As this year's memories glide across my heart, all the love flows through me like oxygen, beginning with the purest breath of youthful innocence, me and you, under a diamond-cut crescent moon. Many picturesque nights have come and gone since then - the me and you now we - a family. Somewhere a clock chimes twelve times, when your first kiss of the new year wakes me from my nostalgic dreams, my joy returns to the moment, a new year, new memories, a love more real, more true, than the chalky moon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/29/2015 12:10:00 PM
So nice to read your verse today, very polished! Light & Love
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Date: 12/28/2014 4:49:00 AM
A nicely penned piece of prose, Rhonda. Cheers! :-) john.
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Date: 12/26/2014 10:17:00 PM
RHONDA, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
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Date: 12/24/2014 1:58:00 PM
Good descriptiveness in this winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/18/2014 5:53:00 AM
The imagery in the poem makes quite a magical write, congratulations on the win, Rhonda
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Date: 12/17/2014 3:03:00 PM
simply mesmerising - amazing imagery:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 12/7/2014 4:24:00 AM
You leave me breathless. A Fav!
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Date: 12/6/2014 9:22:00 PM
Beautiful write Rhonda....a captivating verse
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Date: 12/6/2014 8:40:00 PM
I have read at least 25 poems tonight. Only one other one was as beautiful as this one is. fave.
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Date: 12/6/2014 10:04:00 AM
A beautiful, magical poem Rhonda. So very well done.
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Date: 12/6/2014 3:21:00 AM
So beautiful... I love the image of a diamond cut crescent moon .. Hugs Tim
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Date: 12/6/2014 2:00:00 AM
OH OH OH OH!!! SO many lines here were magical. This should be POTD...and POTW. I loved it Rhonda. My favorite line? I am warmed by a fire inside, wrapped tight in the starry glow of tomorrow's promise. There is contentment and beauty in this piece. :) Thanks for sharing your heart.
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Date: 12/6/2014 1:16:00 AM
Such a Lovely write Rhonda! Loved the picture perfect beauty !
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