A New Home

Snow swallows us with discomfort,
as we tramp across the moor
bent on a visit, a weekly mission
to see your tomb.
We arrive near the marble plaque
the place where you expired
the fault of an unknown murderer:
mad and unknown.

Last week's flowers have been stolen,
a common enough occurrence;
it matters not. For now
you must be playing peacefully
in a garden where birds 
play such melodious songs,
where pools glisten and reflect
the gracious fluttering dragonflies,
where exotic flowers thrive and bloom.
You need not our poor earthly specimens.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Anaya Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 8:40 AM
You need not our poor earthly specimens, it makes me think of an unusual place afterlife. I believe that in a state of mind as you've described in your imaginary garden--I would like to remember this imagery of where I would like to be in the end of my time on earth. Faving it, it touched my heart, dear poet.
Bowring Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 4:46 AM
Dear Victor, this is so wonderfully, poetically written. Such a profound, poignant piece. I love dear SV’s comments- perfectly said. You have captured the scene so well that you can so easily visualise attending the tomb. It’s so sad but you have skilfully brought calming, peaceful reflections into it as well. I especially love the lines, ‘ where pools glisten and reflect’ ‘ where exotic flowers bloom and thrive’. Wonderful imagery. So glad that you are back leaving these gems for all to enjoy.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 5:42 AM
This brings a tear but is beautiful at the same time.
Roper Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 10:03 PM
Great story. Many blessings friend.
Volumes Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 5:35 PM
A serendipitous look into the realms of the dead, who need not our earthly trappings of flowers. They just need us to remember them, lest we forget. A lovely poem dear Victor. I am never a fan of free verse. This however is an exception. Wen
Buhagiar Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 12:45 AM
At this point in time I am writing only free verse. My muse has left me.
Rolland Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 6:19 AM
you made me drop a tear, what an inspiring poem, thanks Victor
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 1:41 PM
so nice to imagine the deceased in this beautiful new home. Very pretty, Victor.
Buehler Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 4:26 PM
The sad beginning to this evocative poem, happily ends with the beauty and triumph, of eternity in heaven. Well wrought!
Greenhough Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 3:17 PM
An interesting poem. Murder is terrible. I hope he is in a better place.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 12:28 PM
You often tell a story within your poetic imagery! Sad way to die and beautiful on the other side.
One Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 11:48 AM
Deep and emotive words dear Victor..
Poet Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 6:44 AM
On their divine journeys, they are conveyed to breathtaking locations. A profoundly emotional composition, Victor.
May Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 6:34 AM
A poignant write, heavenly journeys take them to beautiful places
Pandit Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 6:20 AM
You take us to the forlorn scene through your descriptive words. A new home--peace!
Mcintosh Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 3:45 AM
Yes. Flowers can't possibly suffice. Beautiful thoughts glowing with insight. God bless you always, love, Gina
Empress Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 3:42 AM
Yes some need not this cold cruel world, and they deserve the peace and heaven after life. Its a comforting thought really during grief, its sad evocative but ends on a very thoughtful note. Pleasure always reading your work.
Cunningham Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 3:32 AM
Sas that some would stoop so low to steal from a person's final resting place. It's consolation to know that our loved ones are in a better place. Tom
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 3:11 AM
I like the way cold discomfort in your first stanza contrast’s with the self reassuring comfort of the last, well penned as always, cheers David
Andresen Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 2:38 AM
- Stealing flowers from a grave ... is really badly done ... inhumane ... there is no respect - A lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs
Williams Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 2:23 AM
Sad and beautiful at the same time . As you say the departed are in a wonderful place, they don't care about earthly specimens. Thoughts are for the loved ones who have to live with the earthly memories, good of bad. A great write dear Victor . Hugs
Nicholsen Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 2:08 AM
Wow this is so awesome indeed I enjoyed reading your work.
Seeker Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 1:24 AM
soulful and melancholic, yet acceptant and nostalgic, forms fade yet memory lingers, cradling the heart. enjoyed your beautiful write, dear Victor
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