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A New Girl

The kindly old man, had become irritable Over the death of his wife Not one iota of happiness left Those golden years, ripped from his life She had been, an excellent, engineer Keeping everything in order He had learned, to appreciate, her generous ways Tried to always, be genial, toward her A knock at the door, caught him off guard Since no one ever came by He opened the door, to a noisy orange box When a puppy lit up his eyes Admiring the dog, he first thought how costly This kink was simply absurd It emits, those whimpering, puppy cries He comforts, with baby talk words Holding it close, a kiss on his cheek His heart melts, as he takes her inside He's caught a new girl, names her Iris For the flowers his wife romanticized First visit to the vet, to have her checked out She immediately chases a cat The smiling old man, gathers her in Softly gives her head a love pat an original poem by Daniel Turner

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Date: 8/26/2016 11:02:00 AM
..such a sweet innocent tale evoking a 'warm, fuzzy, happy, feel good' aura that is a delightful way to begin the day :-) Particularly touching is the 'old man's smile' as new life seems to have breathed into him, by this cute ball of fur..their power to heal, to love so unconditionally is inspiring. I adore your story poem... a lovely reminder for me that in time..I will again feel the happiness of 'puppy love'..only mine will be a 'he':-) thank you DT..a very personal favourite. lynn xo
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Lynn Marie
Date: 8/26/2016 4:42:00 PM
..you receive 'top honour' with a gigantic 'bouquet of happiness, blessings and hugs' from me for this endearing poem:-)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 8/26/2016 11:19:00 AM
It was for a contest. A 21 word challenge. It received an NA, go figure! One of my last few contest entries. Thank you for your time and kind remarks, Lynn Marie. Of course it was inspired by "Buddy" my trusty companion.Lol
Date: 7/9/2016 3:01:00 PM
God damn!! You are just too good at this Daniel.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/9/2016 3:31:00 PM
Thank you Jean. I appreciate your enthusiasm. I also appreciate your lovely visits.
Date: 7/5/2016 7:05:00 PM
Wow! You did a great job of working all the required words in logically, meaningfully! Janice
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/5/2016 7:52:00 PM
Thank you Janice. I really appreciate your kind comments. I honestly try to write poems people can relate to. I get lucky every once in a while. I'm grateful for your support.
Date: 7/5/2016 2:44:00 PM
i like where you took this piece, daniel...awhh, so adorable!..huggs
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/5/2016 2:48:00 PM
Thank you, nette. I found this one rather difficult. I appreciate the lovely comments and your valuable time.
Date: 7/5/2016 1:21:00 PM
A fabulous tale DT. It read well, no words seemed forced. Good luck in the contest.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/5/2016 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Tim. It's great to have you back. I appreciate your kind words. I hope you are not badly sunburned, that South Carolina sun can be a booger.

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