A New Girl

The kindly old man, had become irritable
Over the death of his wife
Not one iota of happiness left
Those golden years, ripped from his life
She had been, an excellent, engineer
Keeping everything in order
He had learned, to appreciate, her generous ways
Tried to always, be genial, toward her
A knock at the door, caught him off guard
Since no one ever came by
He opened the door, to a noisy orange box
When a puppy lit up his eyes
Admiring the dog, he first thought how costly
This kink was simply absurd
It emits, those whimpering, puppy cries
He comforts, with baby talk words
Holding it close, a kiss on his cheek
His heart melts, as he takes her inside
He's caught a new girl, names her Iris
For the flowers his wife romanticized
First visit to the vet, to have her checked out
She immediately chases a cat
The smiling old man, gathers her in
Softly gives her head a love pat



       an original poem by Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marie Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 11:02 AM
..such a sweet innocent tale evoking a 'warm, fuzzy, happy, feel good' aura that is a delightful way to begin the day :-) Particularly touching is the 'old man's smile' as new life seems to have breathed into him, by this cute ball of fur..their power to heal, to love so unconditionally is inspiring. I adore your story poem... a lovely reminder for me that in time..I will again feel the happiness of 'puppy love'..only mine will be a 'he':-) thank you DT..a very personal favourite. lynn xo
Marie Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 4:42 PM
..you receive 'top honour' with a gigantic 'bouquet of happiness, blessings and hugs' from me for this endearing poem:-)
Turner Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 11:19 AM
It was for a contest. A 21 word challenge. It received an NA, go figure! One of my last few contest entries. Thank you for your time and kind remarks, Lynn Marie. Of course it was inspired by "Buddy" my trusty companion.Lol
Murray Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 3:01 PM
God damn!! You are just too good at this Daniel.
Turner Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 3:31 PM
Thank you Jean. I appreciate your enthusiasm. I also appreciate your lovely visits.
Canerdy Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 7:05 PM
Wow! You did a great job of working all the required words in logically, meaningfully! Janice
Turner Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 7:52 PM
Thank you Janice. I really appreciate your kind comments. I honestly try to write poems people can relate to. I get lucky every once in a while. I'm grateful for your support.
Onclaud Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 2:44 PM
i like where you took this piece, daniel...awhh, so adorable!..huggs
Turner Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 2:48 PM
Thank you, nette. I found this one rather difficult. I appreciate the lovely comments and your valuable time.
Smith Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 1:21 PM
A fabulous tale DT. It read well, no words seemed forced. Good luck in the contest.
Turner Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 1:48 PM
Thanks Tim. It's great to have you back. I appreciate your kind words. I hope you are not badly sunburned, that South Carolina sun can be a booger.
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