A New Country Song

A NEW COUNTRY SONG




I was ravaged today
by

three country songs 
on the truck radio 
each moaning the lyrics  
". . daddy's pickup truck"
and "the Georgia mud"
while whining that
"she was leavin' me!".

(God! What woman
would not leave if that was
all she ever heard from him
or ANYONE ELSE!)

I reckon he lost 
because
the fourth song I heard
had ". . . drink a beer!"
finishing each and every line!

Is there no shame no style
no class no original music
anymore?

Even David Allen Coe trashed
better, with his "The Perfect
Country and Western Song". 
At least the drunken pickup
driver was meeting his jailbird
mama, not daddy, in the rain
and crashed his own pickup 
into the train!

Oh Waylon, Kris, Willie, Tom Paul
Chet, Loretta, Bill, Lester, Roy
and all you others un-named un-tamed
legends!  what have you 
let happen?

Where are the lonesome, snow white
 doves, the mule train sorrows, 
the wildwood flowers, the Tennessee waltzes,
the shotgun willies or the Luckenbach wails
 of songs gone by?

Why was I ravaged today 
by

The flashing neon sign 
re-echoed ghosts
of disturbed country music, 
not re-assured by soulful 
originality?
Are we no longer able 
to compose, to play 
in a twitterless world
of art, creativity, quality?

Alas we have lost; I want 
to scream!
"Turn off the radio, the IPOD, 
close the door!"

I will spin my LP's once more,
crash my pickup into daddy's garage
and listen to Les Paul and Mary Ford,
. . . end my culture, and

. . .  "drink a beer!".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Crytzer Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 4:51 PM
Thanks, Fritz the Cat
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