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A New Beginning

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In this poem it's pertaining to a woman whose boyfriend had just broke up with her.

So broke...her heart Torn apart, she... Can start...anew

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 2/2/2019 12:46:00 AM

Oh, I like this, Charlie - nicely done, my friend! I must give this new form a spin ... challenging, that! :-)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/1/2019 1:05:00 AM

WOW! Nice. Sure 'll try.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/28/2019 3:47:00 AM

good one, charlie... one requirement of a than-bauk is that it should be witty according to TPS definition of this form!... let me try... huggs

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/27/2019 9:10:00 PM

Very nice, Charles.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/27/2019 8:53:00 PM

I like the form , Charles, Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/27/2019 2:11:00 PM

Hi Charlie, This is a good example. I think I will give it a go:-)Alexis

Charles Messina
Date: 1/27/2019 2:46:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis! Good luck with this challenging form :) Charlie

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/27/2019 1:57:00 PM

Great example.

Charles Messina
Date: 1/27/2019 2:46:00 PM

Thank you, Caren!

Constance La France

Date: 1/27/2019 12:09:00 PM

Charlie, oh you, you !!!! That's a hard form, but you like to challenge us so this girl will give it a great big whirl ! Oh and I like yours, been there, did that a few times ~

Charles Messina
Date: 1/27/2019 12:12:00 PM

LOL-I can be quite challenging at times. You go girl! Can't wait to read yours! I'm not a woman, but I've been there a few times myself. :)