A Mystic Place To Live ------ Potd

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Haphazardly, 	
Infinity and affinity mingled, 
In an asymmetry imbalance.

A dishevelled universe, 
Grew and shrank as fire devoured, 
Yet ice sustained.

Outrages currents swirled,
Straightened, dispersed, and garnered,
Dissipated into nothing, 
Only to surge again and again and again.

Until a soft soothing spirit unfurled itself, 
Protracting into every nook,
Fire and ice detached their selves 
Into their proper assumed place,

Light and darkness found their proper place. 
How harmonious was creation now!

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Date: 6/27/2021 8:09:00 PM
Great description, congratulations on your POTD!
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Date: 6/24/2021 6:18:00 PM
Back with congrats on POTD!
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Date: 6/22/2021 12:33:00 PM
Hi Victor, This is a masterpiece my friend - congratulations on POTD - i'm sure you enjoyed the honor bestowed on you. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/22/2021 6:34:00 AM
- Congratulations on your very beautiful p.o.t.d., Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/21/2021 6:24:00 AM
WoW! Victor, This is beautiful! Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/20/2021 6:37:00 PM
"Light and darkness found their proper place" Yes, I completely agree. My heart rejoices in the fact that God is in control. Of everything. Your thoughts curl gently around me. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 6/20/2021 5:41:00 PM
Victor, congratulations on POTD, great imagery and feel. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/20/2021 4:10:00 PM
I'm back with congratulations on POTD, Victor. You did an amazing job in creating this extraordinary verse. :=)
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Date: 6/20/2021 1:38:00 PM
A sense of disorder and chaos settling into harmony. Nicely written. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 6/20/2021 1:03:00 PM
Victor, I hope you won't mind if I pretend this POTD is for your other recent poem. Though I enjoyed 'Fire and ice detached their selves ~ Into their proper assumed place,'. I so loved your 'pale-yellow cowslips' dancing their 'lonely jig to the tune of the wayward breeze' And ending stanza's lasting questions. 'Still do the bells toll? ~ Why? ~ What for? ~ My heart knows, of course. ~ I find a shade, I kneel, I pray. ~~ Let the bells toll. ~ I've heard as cowslips bend their heads'. -Richard
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 6/20/2021 1:33:00 PM
I don't mind. I have some good poems I thought I'd get the best, but I loved writing the cowslips. I don't normally like my own poem, but this one I loved.
Date: 6/20/2021 11:12:00 AM
Well-composed free verse, Victor. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 6/20/2021 10:20:00 AM
Great write, Victor! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 6/20/2021 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed this story. Hope you will enjoy your day with blessings................
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Date: 6/20/2021 7:57:00 AM
From imbalance to harmony you've taken your readers. Nicely composed and congratulations on your POTD, Victor!
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Date: 6/20/2021 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Date: 6/20/2021 7:17:00 AM
Glad to see this well thought out poem get a deserved POTD, Victor:) congratulations:)
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Date: 6/20/2021 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD with this featured prose. You've earned it, particularly with this well-written poetry. Enjoy your day
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Date: 6/20/2021 5:29:00 AM
A wonder and a mystery is what the creator did and gave us all a beautiful place where we could live. Congratulations on poem of the day Victor, enjoy the honour, enjoy the day… Belle
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Date: 6/20/2021 5:11:00 AM
Victor, nicely done, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 6/20/2021 4:23:00 AM
Wonderful write Victor, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 6/20/2021 4:17:00 AM
Back with congrats Victor on poem of the day. Enjoy the day!
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Date: 6/20/2021 1:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved Potd! Enjoy the weekend.
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Date: 6/20/2021 12:54:00 AM
Back with congratulations Victor on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 6/20/2021 12:56:00 AM
Thank you, Tom.
Date: 6/19/2021 11:45:00 AM
Creation is harmonious indeed, with God at the center of it. I enjoyed these beautiful, inspiring words. Enjoy your weekend, my friend. :)
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Date: 6/19/2021 10:44:00 AM
How beautifully you convey creation Victor. You chose a glorious photo to share as seen from above the clouds. We are divine beings living on a divine planet we all need to appreciate. Blessings xxoo
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