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A Mysterious Voice

From here and there, I hear him speak His voice, falling in mild whispers But he always plays hide n’ seek Never once I could see his countenance At times he speaks loud n’ clear Sometimes so harsh and stern How he denies my wild longings With a stubborn ‘Yes’ or ‘No’ What magic and mystery in him stored I often wonder and am at a loss to gauge Amid the shards of my broken sleep I often struggle to decipher his mysterious codes I sought after him over and again Down the nights and through the days But he eludes me like a mysterious sprite Prancing around and hiding about When I give up my search after him He shouts and whistles amid the confused din And I see faint truths suddenly uncoiling Forming in me a clearer perspective of life At the end of my incessant search I chanced to meet him within my own self Peering into my depths, I saw him, his face veiled And a balance held obliquely in his hands When the veil was lifted from his countenance I saw him clear, clear as in a mirror Someone with such commanding air And so stern with an impassive demeanor In the still pool of humid silence I heard him introduce himself His sound ringing distinct and clear Leaving echoes in the caverns of stillness “I am CON- SCI-ENCE, your alter ego Listen to me, you shall not stray’’! When he thus revealed himself before me, I stood Wonderstruck staring into the face that eluded me for long Honorable Mention 'Wonderstruck' Poetry Contest Sponsored by Robert James Liguori

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Date: 11/21/2021 7:04:00 PM
You had me on the edge of my chair wondering who this was, Valsa. Good luck in the contest, gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/22/2021 6:03:00 PM
Very kind of you, my friend. ~ On the Precipice
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Valsa George
Date: 11/21/2021 8:06:00 PM
Thank God you didn't fall ! Before letting you on the precarious edge, I unveiled the mystery, so that the fall of a good friend of mine could be averted!
Date: 11/21/2021 10:28:00 AM
I am wonderstruck your con science is male . . . .
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Valsa George
Date: 11/21/2021 8:02:00 PM
Ha.... ha! Don't you know male voice is more powerful and female voice just musical !
Date: 11/21/2021 9:05:00 AM
A rather lovely piece penned so well Valsa, stunning use of imagery throughout this one. Blessings,Gordon
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Valsa George
Date: 11/21/2021 8:00:00 PM
Thank you very much Gordon ! Stay happy and loved !
Date: 11/21/2021 9:01:00 AM
Beautifully written, Valsa~ and an important message for humankind.....listen to our conscience's. Good luck in the contest! Blessings, Paulette
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Valsa George
Date: 11/21/2021 7:59:00 PM
Paulette, so happy over your sweet comment and the best wishes! Thanks a lot ....Did I tell you, I am in love with your name ?!
Date: 11/21/2021 5:43:00 AM
No, you should not stray. Great personification. Best for a win. ~~
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Valsa George
Date: 11/21/2021 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor .... I am quite new to all these contests, just participating in them for the fun of it !
Date: 11/21/2021 5:09:00 AM
Another excellent write, Valsa. I like the flow/meter of your story--mysterious till the end. And of course, the end is superbly revealed.
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Valsa George
Date: 11/21/2021 7:40:00 AM
You never disappoint and your encouragement helps me in gaining confidence. Thank you so much for your uplifting words, dear Vijay !

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