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A Muted Day

I stroll leisurely along the avenue 
as silent trees stand sentinel.	
Not one leaf rustles or whispers; 
no branch breathes or even sighs.
No gust catches me off guard 
at the top of the hill so that I
pull my scarf more snuggly ‘round me. 	
All is still. 
	The earth exhales its evocative perfume. 

The birds quietly murmur 
to each other among the leaves. 
The squirrels merely mumble 
as they scavenge for winter’s food; 
their chatter subdued among 
the boughs.  The Crow’s raucous call 
remains unvoiced.

I wonder if animals are aware 
of the change in the air?
How restrained they are - 
how subdued the normal clamor.	
					
As I walk, only my footsteps echo
in my ear -  all other sounds 
are suppressed to a subtle 
understated shuffle - the day 
is like walking through cotton – 
or a cocoon of softest 
flannel- so subtle, so serene, 
so restrained.

The autumn colors’ resonant 
pigments subtle as the ripple 
on a millpond, hum an inaudible 
lullaby, rich and deep to keep 
the noises at bay. Today 
the burgundies, oranges and yellows 
are muted, their potency not 
diminished by the absence of the sun.

I see each and every color 
created, every individual
leaf and branch that shades 
the world; and all the muted 
undertones in between murmur 
their quiet hue.

The clouded sky of pearlized 
gray allows the colors to emit 
the hue of their choosing - burnished, 
buffed beyond recognition; brilliant 
in the restrainment of inaudible 
complexity -

on this muted day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/27/2017 4:52:00 AM
I like this poem, where all the sound and color is hushed. My favorite line is "as silent trees stand sentinel". The stanza I like most is the fifth.
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Annette Gagliardi
Date: 11/26/2017 9:23:00 PM
thank you. I wanted to paint a picture of the day as I walked in it.
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Annette Gagliardi
Date: 11/26/2017 9:23:00 PM
thank you. I wanted to paint a picture of the day as I walked in it.

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