Raul Moreno Poet Choka

A Musical Affair

Curvaceous body,
His bow caresses her strings:
Ode to Joy...begins.
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Musical romance,
Passionate sighs grace the air:
Fervent notes ascend.
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Music fills the room,
She’s addicted to his bow:
The violin plays.
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Heated melodies,
Of a musical affair:
Between bow and strings.

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John Freeman November 8, 2009 at 11:46 AM A great metaphor here Raul, in your Choka. Also congratulations on your great poem "Tree Prophesies" Sincerely, Moses

Doris Culverhouse September 24, 2009 at 4:55 PM smoking hot, nicely penned

James Fraser September 24, 2009 at 2:42 PM Champion write Raul, it's another number one for me>>James

Charmaine Chircop September 24, 2009 at 12:52 PM i can feel the bow caressing the strings,music ,passion,an affair between a bow and a string with never ending melody,lusty indeed--A favs,Charma

Carrie Richards September 24, 2009 at 8:29 AM Ode to Joy.....(one of my favorites).....I can hear those sweet strings! Love this, Raul! :) ~ Carrie

Sara Kendrick September 24, 2009 at 6:33 AM Choka that boy. Keep writing. Sara

Sean Kelly September 24, 2009 at 2:11 AM Raul , You ROCK !!! : No roll .... On second thoughts , must read this again .....

Barbara Gorelick September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM You and Ruben must be drinking a "special " tea..love it.. Who knew a choka could be so erotic? smile. BG