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A Musical Affair

Curvaceous body, His bow caresses her strings: Ode to Joy...begins. · Musical romance, Passionate sighs grace the air: Fervent notes ascend. · Music fills the room, She’s addicted to his bow: The violin plays. · Heated melodies, Of a musical affair: Between bow and strings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/8/2009 11:46:00 AM
A great metaphor here Raul, in your Choka. Also congratulations on your great poem "Tree Prophesies" Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 9/24/2009 4:55:00 PM
smoking hot, nicely penned
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:42:00 PM
Champion write Raul, it's another number one for me>>James
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:52:00 PM
i can feel the bow caressing the strings,music ,passion,an affair between a bow and a string with never ending melody,lusty indeed--A favs,Charma
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Date: 9/24/2009 8:29:00 AM
Ode to Joy.....(one of my favorites).....I can hear those sweet strings! Love this, Raul! :) ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/24/2009 6:33:00 AM
Choka that boy. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:11:00 AM
Raul , You ROCK !!! : No roll .... On second thoughts , must read this again .....
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:00:00 AM
You and Ruben must be drinking a "special " tea..love it.. Who knew a choka could be so erotic? smile. BG
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