A Murmuring Brook

A murmuring brook of love songs runs along my life's path every night I go near it and let my heart take a bath. © kash poet (kashinath karmakar) ========================================= Placement : 2nd ( Sept 2013 ) Contest: What makes you tick Sponsor: Seren Roberts
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Guzzi Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 1:44 PM
Hi there thanks so much for stopping by my verses! Hope all is well with you? Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
September 26, 2013 at 2:25 AM
kashi.. 2 weeks on leave?.. come over or i might as well get lost as well..:) huggs
Onclaud Avatar
September 26, 2013 at 2:25 AM
kashi.. 2 weeks on leave?.. come over or i might as well get lost as well..:) huggs
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 11:40 PM
kash, you are here? where can I find this contest where you say I got an HM? is it at some haiku site?
Chircop Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 1:56 PM
Ow gee you definitely make me tick which such beauty.Congratulations and hope to read more new masterpieces of yours soon.
Onclaud Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 10:47 AM
kashi.. got more?.. still under the weather, what a soup charade...yucky!..:) huggs
Dietrich Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 5:41 PM
Kash, Good Grief is for the Grief contest! Of Black eyed Susan! you should try.
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September 21, 2013 at 8:03 AM
amazing poetry, Kash, congrats...
A  Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 7:33 AM
congratulations Kash, .........SKAT
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September 19, 2013 at 10:11 AM
Kash, , congratulations:) In Seren's "what makes you tick" contest... always~ Linda
Dietrich Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 10:10 PM
yours was so poetic, Kash. Congrats on its win.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 6:23 PM
I love it Kash, I feel relaxed already. Congratulations.
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September 16, 2013 at 2:32 PM
Your words paint a beautiful picture, Kash! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Onclaud Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 12:18 PM
ohhhh, another crown for you, kashi... congrats!..:) huggs
Roberts Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 1:57 PM
Congratulations and thank you for entering my contest ....Seren
Onclaud Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 2:05 PM
now i can breathem kashi bud... been waiting for your writes and yes, this compensates for your absence on this page.. you sweeten the poetic pot!... love it!..:) huggs
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 12:40 AM
ahhh, finally, a poem, short but so sweet!!!
Tsiluma Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 12:59 AM
Excellent write Kash! I love the imagery- the songs that fill your path. Well penned.
Manassian Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 7:46 AM
Oh KASH! This is absolutely amazing! I was so curious to know what makes you tick! You will do well!!! VERY well! :)
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September 11, 2013 at 6:21 AM
This is a very beautiful and enlightening write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this morning! You have amazed me by the splendor of this incredible piece! What a fantastic verse, Great Work!!
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