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A movie plays on like a heart felt song of love-

"An evanescent moment, fleeting, yet forever shall stay A memory of you held subdued unable to fade away Replaying in the mind a day long ago A beautiful picture of you unable to let go"

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Ink Empress

Date: 3/26/2025 11:20:00 AM

So soulfully moving and touching how youv expressed in few words, i love your use of the word “ evanescent” and also how youv written “ Replaying in the mind a day long ago A beautiful picture of you unable to let go" how heartfelt! Some memories live on! Never fades. Pleasure visiting your page today. I see your name alot on winners list now and your poetry is beautiful and very evocative! Pleasure reading you! Sending you light always