A Mouse You Say

A mouse you say
As if to denigrate my worth
make of me something small.
Knowing nothing of my heart,
my will, my daring, my courage.
You see me as weak.
Have you ever risked all
To bring food to your family?
Outrun a snarling barn cat?
Stealthily snatched the cheese
from the springing death of a mouse trap?”

You know not the trepidations
I wrestle with, feel not the fears
I overcome, hear not the song
within my soul.  And yet
you judge me
not knowing that I
am one helluva mouse.


©5/21/2021

Personification Poem 150 Poetry contest

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Date: 6/30/2021 4:19:00 PM
Dropping back with many congrats John:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/28/2021 8:56:00 PM
A great personification, John, congratulations on your win in Caren's contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/28/2021 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a cute mouse story/write. No more traps for the little ones?????? Enjoy your win with blessings..............
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Date: 5/22/2021 9:53:00 PM
G'day John ... you mention a mouse trap. A quote I heard; it's the second mouse that gets the cheese. A cunning mouse as you wrote is a smart creature indeed - thanks John - Lindsay
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Date: 5/22/2021 6:58:00 AM
Adorable. I love it. God bless you Friend, Love, Gina
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Date: 5/21/2021 8:42:00 PM
So well-written, John. I loved your choice of subject, too. Excellent personification.
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John Lawless
Date: 6/28/2021 12:49:00 PM
Hey Milt, my first sortie into writing "outside the box" was in high school english where I wrote an essay entitled "If I Were a Mouse"
Date: 5/21/2021 2:53:00 PM
excellent personification John I love it:-) hugs jan xx
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