A Mouse Named Cheeto

There once was a mouse named Cheeto,
Who ventured from his hole incognito.
He wore some cat fur,
And pretended to purr,
But he sounded more like a mosquito.

3/10/11
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Johnson Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 6:55 AM
Very clever and funny. -mdj
Sambourne Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 7:09 PM
Very funny and clever, Kim. Loved it. I admire your imagination. A delightfully witty limerick. Best wishes, Brian
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March 30, 2021 at 3:27 AM
Cheeto sounds delightful, I am sure he had some encounters with Mice who were defeat-o'ed.
Merryman Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 9:24 AM
Thanks for your comment, Caren!
Gauthier Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 8:32 PM
Ahhh ~ adorable limerick
Merryman Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Thank you, Line!
Kendrick Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 2:31 PM
I bet he did. I wonder if he got away with the trickery? Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
Merryman Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Somehow, I don't think he got away with it. LOL Thank you for your comment, Sara!
Pettit Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 5:58 PM
A clever write.
Merryman Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 12:35 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Leffanta Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 11:33 AM
Clever! Aloha! Rico
Merryman Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 12:34 PM
Thank you, Rico!
Pandit Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 5:33 AM
Fun read, Kim. Expertly executed.
Merryman Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 12:34 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Flood Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 2:18 AM
Arrrrrrgggg!!!! A Mousequito! Delightful. Terry
Merryman Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 12:34 PM
Thank you, Terry!
Hankins Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 8:32 PM
Wonderful. LOL! Nothing better than a fine, well-written limerick. Good stuff!!!
Merryman Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 12:33 PM
Thank you, Milton!
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