A Mouse Crossed My Path

A tiny mouse tip-toed cross my path
   Arose immediately my wrath 
Set for him, a pungent mousetrap
   Filled with muenster cheese

Tingling all over, anticipating a bloodbath 
   I cringed at myself, a bona fide psychopath
Gloating over the creature's perceived unease
   How dare he forget to say "Please?"

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Date: 5/28/2020 3:21:00 PM
He was a smart one to tiptoe; most of mine skate by on power rollerblades.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/28/2020 4:43:00 PM
That mouse's skin was mostly gray matter. lol. ~ gw
Date: 5/26/2020 9:46:00 PM
Gershon, Funny poem tickled. Gotta be enticed by a good muenster to find better etiquette, at least until done in. -Richard
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Date: 5/26/2020 10:15:00 PM
Mickey Muenster, I presume. lol. Thanks, Richard. ~ gw
Date: 5/26/2020 7:26:00 PM
G'day Gershon … one little mouse and the household goes to war. I love the way these little guys frighten the life out of even bikies. Now a snake is a different matter - thanks Gershon - Lindsay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2020 10:10:00 PM
Ha, ha! I have a power-lifter relative who is deathly afraid of spiders, any size. Can you imagine?! -- Go figure. Thanks, Lindsay.
Date: 5/26/2020 5:44:00 PM
Very clever. Beware of Greeks bearing gifts or cheese. Stay frosty my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2020 10:06:00 PM
I'm gonna be careful of mice saying please, as well. Thanks, David! :) gw
Date: 5/26/2020 4:40:00 PM
Haha, good manners cost nothing. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2020 8:58:00 PM
--- And bad manner could cost this mouse big-time! lol. Thanks, Tom! :) gw
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