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A Mouse Crossed My Path

A tiny mouse tip-toed cross my path Arose immediately my wrath Set for him, a pungent mousetrap Filled with muenster cheese Tingling all over, anticipating a bloodbath I cringed at myself, a bona fide psychopath Gloating over the creature's perceived unease How dare he forget to say "Please?"

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/28/2020 3:21:00 PM

He was a smart one to tiptoe; most of mine skate by on power rollerblades.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/28/2020 4:43:00 PM

That mouse's skin was mostly gray matter. lol. ~ gw

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/26/2020 9:46:00 PM

Gershon, Funny poem tickled. Gotta be enticed by a good muenster to find better etiquette, at least until done in. -Richard

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2020 10:15:00 PM

Mickey Muenster, I presume. lol. Thanks, Richard. ~ gw

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/26/2020 7:26:00 PM

G'day Gershon … one little mouse and the household goes to war. I love the way these little guys frighten the life out of even bikies. Now a snake is a different matter - thanks Gershon - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2020 10:10:00 PM

Ha, ha! I have a power-lifter relative who is deathly afraid of spiders, any size. Can you imagine?! -- Go figure. Thanks, Lindsay.

David Mchattie

Date: 5/26/2020 5:44:00 PM

Very clever. Beware of Greeks bearing gifts or cheese. Stay frosty my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2020 10:06:00 PM

I'm gonna be careful of mice saying please, as well. Thanks, David! :) gw

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/26/2020 4:40:00 PM

Haha, good manners cost nothing. Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2020 8:58:00 PM

--- And bad manner could cost this mouse big-time! lol. Thanks, Tom! :) gw