A Mountain Journey

A thousand birds are singing in hidden places, oh, how I envy their lofty tree top view; sweet the songs that drift down the mountain spaces, and listen, distant thunder echoes in a sky of blue ! Soon, I take a rest from my journey by a lake, where colorful fish swim, so pretty; and on a submerged rock slithers a green snake, oh, such a mesmerizing underwater city ! The clear blue water is mirror smooth, the sky, clouds and trees reflected; this vision, my heart does soothe, oh, wilderness must always be protected ! Rested, I walk a tangled vine draped path, whistles, croaks and rustlings swirl; delightful the sounds of nature on this footpath, then and then- another mountain top lake for this girl ! _____________________________ May 9, 2017 Rhyme/A Mountain Journey Copyright Protected, ID 899051 Best Rhyming Poem, May to July, 2017 sponsor, John Hamilton Second Place ______________________________ Written for the contest, Mountaintop Journey Sponsor Brenda Chiri First Place
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Date: 8/7/2017 11:56:00 AM
This poem made me swoon from the beauty of it Constance! This is one of your best for me and going into my Faves! Congratulations on your well deserved Second placement! : )
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Date: 8/7/2017 10:20:00 AM
Such beautiful imagery; congratulations on your lovely win :))
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Date: 8/7/2017 9:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Constance.
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Date: 8/6/2017 3:26:00 PM
What a beautiful rhyme, I see it won before, confirming this truly is a winner, congrats Constance on a very worthy win!
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Date: 6/13/2017 5:10:00 PM
You weaved the required words into this beauty so effortlessly Constance. No wonder it came in first! Congratulations! A Fave for me! : )
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Date: 6/13/2017 11:33:00 AM
Beautiful !! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 6/13/2017 2:35:00 AM
Lovely imagery; an enchanting and mesmerising journey you have taken us on. Congratulations on your First Place win! Regards, John.
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Date: 6/12/2017 7:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 6/12/2017 8:17:00 AM
A beautiful journey, Constance, congratulations on your top win:)
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Date: 6/12/2017 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/11/2017 2:20:00 PM
Great job, on this!! best of luck in the contest!!
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Date: 5/10/2017 1:15:00 PM
Sounds delightful, beautiful walking country. B.W. Good luck in the Contest. // Barry
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