A Mothers Shine

cradle of the womb a mother pats, gives a name countenance changes a mother’s shine - God’s glory preparations made - a safe space she cups newborn’s head the smallest body a part of her soul for years either on her shoulder or next to her heart - a safe place on pillow, her head a mother in death’s cradle daughter feels her heart she smooths the reflection of the cross on her chest; mom rests the cycle of life a daughter must bear the grief did mom teach her how she kept her safe in the womb her mother’s presence brings peace 5/6/2022
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Date: 5/13/2022 11:06:00 PM
This is a lovely poem within a poem Kim "she cups newborn’s head the smallest body a part of her soul for years either on her shoulder or next to her heart - a safe place"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2022 6:41:00 PM
Thank you, Caren! I love that you take the time to see the details. God bless you and hugs ~
Date: 5/9/2022 5:19:00 PM
Your poem brought back so many safe moments I felt in my mother's arms. She went to heaven 8 years ago, but still comforts me through my spirit. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Date: 5/7/2022 8:20:00 PM
You brought me into a precious circle of love with this write, Kim. A privilege to experience it. Thanks, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2022 5:48:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon! <3
Date: 5/7/2022 1:55:00 AM
I know how badly you miss your mother's love. A Lovely series of tanka honoring your mother . From Heaven she will be smiling at this honor, Kim !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2022 12:19:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa! So strange, the absence. <3
Date: 5/7/2022 12:58:00 AM
A beautiful poem. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2022 12:20:00 PM
Thank you, Victor!
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