A Mother's Love

Every sting of the belt can be timed with
your shouting. A perverse syncopation musical Crack!
You can feel the displaced air just before- Did you know
that? I read somewhere that a whip breaks the sound 
barrier just as it breaks polyester-cotton blend and flesh.
Sweaty fists gripping chain cross-ties, muscles
tighten and strain- I can feel the trickle slow
and meandering lazy rivers of warmth. It should
tickle- squirming against the sensation
I’m sorry Mom! I really am- Be a man! She screams
How would I know how? All of them 
Left you
Left us
Left me
The sonic boom hurts my ear more than anything…at 
least for now. That and the warm throb of a Mother’s love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 5/29/2017 5:16:00 AM
The age of 10 comes screaming back to me. Kneeling at the foot of my bunk bed after hiding all the belts I could find. Not quite sure which offensive - either for being caught stealing at the local convenience store or was it for skipping school for two weeks in a row after mom would leave for work. Things then are not as they are now.
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Date: 5/16/2017 11:42:00 AM
I truly no what this feels like, Great poem
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