A Mother's Fury

A mother's fury Unleashing her punishment ---- Sweet revenge is dealt

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T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 8/6/2010 2:31:00 PM

Beautiful words.Thank you for your kind comment on my poem winning.I am so eccited about it.Teresa

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2010 5:04:00 PM

don't know the context, but in the right circumstance, it can be a good thing!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/15/2010 3:24:00 PM

That could go for a mother who was punishing a disobedient child also when the child openly blantantly disobeyed her...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for the comments on my write about the rasberries ...No, they are not wild but cultivated and planted by me about 1995 or so...I just planted three plants and I just have a few berries every year...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/15/2010 12:10:00 PM

Excellent haiku, James. Mother Nature is indeed taking her revenge. Wishing you the top spot in the contest. As you know, I will not be posting on here in the future, but I will stop by to visit your work. Had enough of the bullying and the slams, but there are folks like you whose works I admire so much that I will have to keep up with you. Love always to a dear friend, Carolyn