A Mother's Advice To Her Daughter, the Bride-To-Be

When does forever become an option? 

Only when one can still find
Inspiration for living
Despite the stale smell of saliva
From the person across the bed.

Consider it better
To regret walking away
Than having stayed with much regret.

So should today the fading footsteps
With the banging door
—the sounds of an almost wedding— 
Be a reason for sleepless tear-fests, 
Tomorrow it can be a cause for appreciation
Or gratitude for thinking twice.

For it matters not how the heart aches now
For affection
Or lust; 
In the end what matters is how
The small talk before bedtime
—regardless of redundancy— 
Will always be interesting
Time after time after time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/5/2012 12:06:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life Robert. Love, Carol
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Robert Uy
Date: 6/6/2012 2:46:00 AM
Thanks for the welcome and for reading...will follow your advice.
Date: 6/5/2012 4:36:00 AM
It seems obvious to me that you are not sure that your daughter is making the right choice? Am I right? If you felt sure that she was marrying the right person, this wouldn't be the advice. I always think you should choose the person who would have been your best friend even if you were not marrying him. Deep friendship for life is what matters.
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Date: 6/6/2012 2:45:00 AM
Basically, this is about a mother telling her daughter that most of the time, communication...the occasional small talk, is just as important in a marriage as everything else...hope you liked it. Thanks for reading!
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