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Photo by Deborah Guzzi

A Mother Drawn

I saw Mary in Peru
as pastel chalks skimmed over
a gray concrete sidewalk, felting the surface,
baby blues and pinks vibrated with naiveté. 

The artist knelt 
each stroke given in homage
to the Mother of all.
 
I see Mary.
	The Quechua see
Pachamama, earth-time mother,
the oval shape of her beatific head
tilts as if she’s watching—
when as the dragoness she rises, 
she shakes
	the ground. 

A son of Lima dressed the dreary gray day
with earth stone. Chalk forms Her breasts.
He prays. 	We are all children 
at the feet of the Mother;
	the celestial sun and moon were 
birthed
	from her loins.

I saw Mary as he drew with diligence.
I saw my mother and myself,
let all who birth	 be
praised.


First Published in About Place Journal Vol III Issue II
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 10:40 AM
Your message is vivid, clear and conspicuously imaginative. Good work and definitely a 7
Devnath  Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 11:44 PM
Lovely mother's lovely son never forgets her and keep in own lovely heart. Beautiful and outstanding. Loved always,bl
Callus Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 8:00 AM
Outstanding chalk art and poetry! A worthy tribute to all mothers. ...an inspirational stroke! #7 // paul
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 5:34 PM
"I saw my mother and myself..." This is a lovely homage to Divine Mother... Debbie, each verse paints right along with caption. Will you have more to say about your 'Three Line Poetry?' Or, should I just go ahead and submit what I've done? Namaste!
Poetess Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Thanks for sharing this with all of us. Blessings. Love
Kendrick Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 5:02 AM
It is fasinating to see what a person can create from a flat surface..How art has risen from the works of yore..Beautiful work that you have done..Thanks for dropping by my blog page...Looking forward to your work appearing..Be sure to read my contest entry page very well taking note of what I want..Notice what I want for the title and the two forms to use..I will be easy on everyone to an extent..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 10:38 PM
This is great free verse writing, Debs. I like how you relate Mother Mary to the mother of the Indians and in the end, to all of us as mothers. Beautiful. (thanks for my haiku win. I am so glad it finally came to me)
Hopper Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 1:31 PM
Really nice poem! I enjoyed this!
Jolo Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 11:11 AM
Wow. I am seeing peace. Nice write. If people are nice, there would be no conflicts. Love lots. Neldy Jolo
Rashid Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 4:15 PM
PRAISE TO YOU..ADMIRING..LOVING AND GENEROUS..art from heart..respect evry part..u seem to be more artistic than u sound coz its only a true soul tht can find true faiths and true words...
Guzzi Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 4:19 PM
God speaks ALL languages for he created the WORD ;)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 11:50 PM
This is simply stunning Debbie. Your free verse can't be topped!
Pinet Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 8:56 PM
This is a surreal journey into a fantasy drawing inspired by the vision of an earth mother nurturing life and the soul of Man. Emile. #7
Guzzi Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 10:11 PM
Thanks Emile!
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