A Mote of Dust

A mote of dust travels through the air
blown this way and that across the lands.
Finally after many miles it is entrapped
in a rocky crevasse where it joins others.

In time the wind blows in many more motes
and something wondrous starts happening.
These motes give birth to little plants
that struggle at first then bind the land.

Encouraging new birth all around and
flowers that vibrantly wave in the breeze.
Young saplings shoot out deep tap roots
that anchor them in place where they flourish.

In time a mighty forest springs to life
harbouring a wealth of flora and fauna.
All of this came to pass due to just one,
one solitary mote of well travelled dust.

written 11/18/2014

contest Gathering Dust

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/23/2017 9:23:00 AM
What a lovely write Shadow.
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Date: 4/23/2017 4:45:00 AM
What lovely imagery! Congratulations on having your poem featured! Regards, John.
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Date: 11/27/2014 6:48:00 PM
Where the dust blows, the seeds follow. And God restores what disasters destroy. What incite you possess! Keep your wonderful poems coming, Shadow. And thank you for your visit to my page and reading my work. Appreciate it.
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Date: 11/28/2014 5:57:00 AM
ty Darlene so kind of you hugs
Date: 11/23/2014 11:44:00 AM
wow, your mote of dust FLOWERED into a thing of beauty. what a gem this is!
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Date: 11/28/2014 5:55:00 AM
ty Andrea glad you like it hugs
Date: 11/20/2014 2:40:00 AM
such a beautiful pen flowed golden linda dear pal in this
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/28/2014 5:54:00 AM
ty Liam big hugs
Date: 11/19/2014 8:47:00 AM
It is just how the universe was built."well traveled dust". In creation of any sort this is sine qua non. Incredible insight, Shadow. Great. Hugs! XXXXX RAJAT
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Date: 11/19/2014 6:43:00 PM
ty Rajat glad you like it hugs
Date: 11/18/2014 11:12:00 PM
This poem created with just the idea of a mote of dust is amazing. It grew into a lovely poem. A star of creation you are Shadow!#7
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Date: 11/19/2014 6:42:00 PM
ty Connie I enjoy your work too hugs
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