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A Most Humble Abode

Who is it that knocks on my door? It is nearly midnight and not a single creature stirs about Yet, I hear a faint tapping of feet upon my cedar floor Assuredly, my mind lends to perception, a sense of doubt Lo, a man stands before me His hands very much contused In better light, I come to observe the somber face I see A broken man indeed, very much confused I extended to the visitor, a kind greeting One, of a most humble nature The ailing man appears to have received some sort of beating Perhaps he was involved in an unsettled wager? This guest of mine spoke clearly now, and his words were of fright The man was my brother, whom I attended to on this dreadful night

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Date: 4/2/2015 8:37:00 PM
Andrew, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 9/21/2014 8:06:00 PM
very beautifully crafted piece
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Andrew Yates
Date: 9/21/2014 10:37:00 PM
Thank you, kind fellow
Date: 9/14/2014 8:30:00 AM
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Date: 9/12/2014 10:56:00 AM
Andrew,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Andrew Yates
Date: 9/12/2014 5:56:00 PM
Yes, thank you indeed!

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