A Most Humble Abode

Who is it that knocks on my door?
It is nearly midnight and not a single creature stirs about 
Yet, I hear a faint tapping of feet upon my cedar floor 
Assuredly, my mind lends to perception, a sense of doubt

Lo, a man stands before me
His hands very much contused
In better light, I come to observe the somber face I see 
A broken man indeed, very much confused

I extended to the visitor, a kind greeting
One, of a most humble nature
The ailing man appears to have received some sort of beating
 Perhaps he was involved in an unsettled wager?

This guest of mine spoke clearly now, and his words were of fright 
The man was my brother, whom I attended to on this dreadful night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 2, 2015 at 8:37 PM
Andrew, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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September 21, 2014 at 8:06 PM
very beautifully crafted piece
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September 21, 2014 at 10:37 PM
Thank you, kind fellow
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September 14, 2014 at 8:30 AM
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September 12, 2014 at 10:56 AM
Andrew,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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September 12, 2014 at 5:56 PM
Yes, thank you indeed!
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