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A Moonlight Song - Yiruma

The embrace of silence the last paradise walking in the forest when autumn finds winter. A serenade in the moonlight turns my heart to ice; through tears I could see you falling in love with her. Walking in the forest when autumn finds winter a silver line of white shadow wipes our histories. Through tears I could see you falling in love with her; the moment time forgets painted memories. A silver line of white shadow wipes our histories; a serenade in the moonlight turns my heart to ice. The moment time forgets painted memories; the embrace of silence ...the last paradise. 04/04/2018 Artist: Yiruma Titles: A Moonlight Song The Embrace of Silence The Last Paradise Walking in the Forest Autumn Finds Winter Serenade Moonlight Heart Tears I Could See You Falling in Love Silver Line White Shadow The Moment Time Forgets Painted Memories

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Susan Ashley

Date: 5/27/2018 4:25:00 PM

Returning with congratulations, FJ, for your wonderful win with your emotional poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

FJ Thomas
Date: 5/29/2018 11:33:00 AM

Thank you Susan, very much :)

Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2018 4:13:00 PM

Awesome creative verse, Flo, congratulations on your Pantoum win... Hugs Eve

FJ Thomas
Date: 5/29/2018 11:32:00 AM

Thanks so much Eve :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/24/2018 7:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the music pentoum contest. Well done! :)

FJ Thomas
Date: 5/29/2018 10:28:00 AM

Hi Susan :) thank you very much.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2018 1:35:00 PM

- Congratulations on your wonderful 3rd place in the contest, a great music choice Søster :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

FJ Thomas
Date: 5/29/2018 10:27:00 AM

Thanks so much Søster ;*

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/24/2018 1:18:00 PM

I'm just coming back to say congratulations to say congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

FJ Thomas
Date: 5/29/2018 10:27:00 AM

Thank you Alexis ;)

Silent One

Date: 5/24/2018 12:34:00 PM

Your poem is lovely FJ, would have been even better if it was a bit longer.. You did well to get all those titles in such a short poem though.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

FJ Thomas
Date: 5/29/2018 10:26:00 AM

Thank you S1. I haven't the clarity to create longer poems of any substance as of late; but I hope maybe one day :) Thank you again.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/10/2018 12:10:00 PM

While I am not familiar with this artist, your pantoum is so lyrical and haunting!

FJ Thomas
Date: 4/10/2018 2:25:00 PM

It means a lot Michelle thank you so much. His song A River Flows Through You has played on a few movies. It's quite relaxing :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/8/2018 12:59:00 PM

A beautiful and poignant pantoum Shadow. So rhythmic with lovely rhymes, your tender poetic lines flow seamlessly with the use of the song titles. Excellent and best wishes for a win!

FJ Thomas
Date: 4/8/2018 2:10:00 PM

Thank you so very much for all of your kind comments Susan. :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/6/2018 12:41:00 PM

Excellent pantoum Shadow...very challenging to do...but not for you...best of luck and stay in the light...^WW^

FJ Thomas
Date: 4/6/2018 7:35:00 PM

Warrior you tickle the ears dear sir. Thank you :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/5/2018 5:00:00 PM

Hi Shadow , This is a really good Pantoum. Great use of the song titles. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

FJ Thomas
Date: 4/6/2018 7:34:00 PM

Thanks so much Alexis. He actually had so many more titles than I would have guessed so I had to pass up some I absolutely loved. They just didn't fit it this one.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/4/2018 5:08:00 PM

Your poem took me back to places and people I have not seen in a long time, Shadow. There was a time in a forest when a teen love and I carved our initials in a tree. Thank you for bringing that memory back to me. Very lovely imagery!

FJ Thomas
Date: 4/4/2018 8:08:00 PM

Thank you so very much Carolyn. I truly hope it was a good memory!