A Monk and His Dogs

When all around was cold and white,
The kindly monk set out that night;
His dogs were trusty, he was strong,
Prepared to search the whole night long.

He covered miles of icy ground
And wouldn’t stop until he found
The orphans stranded in the snow -
His dogs would know which way to go.

The blizzard blinding, muffling noise,
The friar prayed he’d find the boys.
His dogs discovered huddled forms:
The brothers frozen in the storms.

Alas, the monk arrived too late,
And wept about the children’s fate.

For Isaiah’s Let It Snow contest, inspired by the picture of a monk and his St Bernard dogs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Cavanaugh Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 10:57 PM
Wonderful but sad poem. Well done.
Haick Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 1:23 PM
This will do well! Really sad but excellent, Jack! Perfect rhyme.heartbreaking theme which reminds me of a very recent happening here in town. What inspired this, Jack? You usually write humor. This will be an easy win for you, as always! x xAnnalise
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January 4, 2014 at 7:27 PM
deep and sad Jack, wish it had a happy ending... xox~ LInda
Anish Avatar
January 4, 2014 at 6:38 PM
A sad tale. Is it based on a real incident? Keep 'em coming! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Williams Avatar
January 4, 2014 at 12:53 PM
Jack, great flow and meter it just rolls off the tongue, very well done I like it a lot…David
Sivey Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 10:08 PM
Ah man, such a sad ending my friend, but very effective emotional poetry! You have done excellent with writing this form, building suspense then the climax of their demise at the end...perfect poetry Jack!! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
Thirtyseven Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Must agree with Andrea, same about the sad ending, but what a nice write. Well done, best of luck with the competition, and enjoy 2014. I'm looking forward to many more exchanges. Cheers, Scott
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 5:20 PM
awww, you ended it sad, but I sure like how you did this one. GOOD job with the theme Thanks for reminding me of this particular contest. It is one I really wanted to do.
Kendrick Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 4:46 PM
Ohhhh!! Sad ending..Very good work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Johnson Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 3:13 PM
Oh so sad, Jack. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for reading and making kind comments on my poetry. Love, Joyce
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