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A Moment With You

If only time could for a while freeze for this rare moment with you not to cease so I can have more hours to read through verses of this unending love poem published in your heart If only time could just stay motionless like these hills our forefathers found and left here or at least move as slow as the sand dunes in the kalahari desert for this rare moment with you to perpetually exist If this moment with you, is as perfect as it seems I swear it deserves to be a part of a hall of treasures within my heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/7/2013 12:12:00 PM
Bojosi, lovely win * HUGS & LOVE <3 ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/6/2013 7:07:00 PM
Hi Bojosi. ... CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM!!! awesome :) LUV~ LINDA
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Date: 11/6/2013 3:37:00 PM
very well done, my friend.... Congratulations.... Jake
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Date: 11/6/2013 12:24:00 AM
The romance you asked for. Yes a beautiful piece. Congrads on your place in the contest. John.
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Date: 11/5/2013 5:23:00 PM
the romance in this one melted my heart; every word was perfectly placed and that last stanza was just lovely - congrats!
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