A Moment With You

If only time could for a while freeze
for this rare moment with you not to cease
so I can have more hours to read through verses
of this unending love poem published in your heart

If only time could just stay motionless
like these hills our forefathers found and left here 
or at least move as slow as 
the sand dunes in the kalahari desert
for this rare moment with you to perpetually exist

If this moment with you, is as perfect as it seems
I swear it deserves to be a part
of a hall of treasures within my heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 7, 2013 at 12:12 PM
Bojosi, lovely win * HUGS & LOVE <3 ~SKAT~
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November 6, 2013 at 7:07 PM
Hi Bojosi. ... CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM!!! awesome :) LUV~ LINDA
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November 6, 2013 at 3:37 PM
very well done, my friend.... Congratulations.... Jake
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November 5, 2013 at 5:23 PM
the romance in this one melted my heart; every word was perfectly placed and that last stanza was just lovely - congrats!
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