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A Moment Too Late

Come hell or high water the line he marched toward To head off the charge that the foe would make He chastened himself, urged his tired feet forward Cruel sun with no mercy his uniform baked He saw them ahead, and he started to run Heart's chamber pounding, he stepped up his pace But footsteps unsure, his plan came undone Deep gashes and bruises covered his face I spied him a moment too late, I'm afraid Smoke cleared and he lay on the ground, so still The shots that had felled him whistled 'betrayed' The specter of death did my vision chill (Yet) one thing I'll recall forever that night Those lifeless eyes asked me if I was alright

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Date: 3/16/2021 7:56:00 PM
Powerful poem! Your ending is especially touching.
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Date: 3/17/2021 5:27:00 PM
Thanks for the rave review, Juliet. Appreciated. :) gw
Date: 3/16/2021 4:50:00 PM
Gershon! Impossible not to credit your goose bump inducing Sonnet. A masterpiece of taking us to the smoky setting, putting us in the soldier's boots. You show your acute talent here, Gershon. Gut wrenching stuff.
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Date: 3/16/2021 5:45:00 PM
Whoa! Is that my poem you're writing about, praising it to the skies? Thank you, Sigrid. Hope the world will have fewer guts-wrenching moments this decade. Peace, Gershon
Date: 3/15/2021 9:05:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to those who have given their all. I've never been on a battlefield, but I've seen this scene on the screen many times. Well-written, my friend.
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Date: 3/16/2021 5:43:00 PM
The screen is more poignant than the battlefield, the grind of which lacks perspective. The screen provides it. ~ gw
Date: 3/15/2021 8:05:00 PM
To those who have given their today, for our tomorrow
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/16/2021 5:21:00 PM
Thank you for your on-point bullseye of a comment, Seeker. Peace, Gershon

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