A Moment Too Late

Come hell or high water the line he marched toward
To head off the charge that the foe would make
He chastened himself, urged his tired feet forward
  Cruel sun with no mercy his uniform baked

He saw them ahead, and he started to run
Heart's chamber pounding, he stepped up his pace
But footsteps unsure, his plan came undone
  Deep gashes and bruises covered his face

I spied him a moment too late, I'm afraid
Smoke cleared and he lay on the ground, so still
The shots that had felled him whistled 'betrayed'
  The specter of death did my vision chill

(Yet) one thing I'll recall forever that night
  Those lifeless eyes asked me if I was alright
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ligon Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 7:56 PM
Powerful poem! Your ending is especially touching.
Wolf Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 5:27 PM
Thanks for the rave review, Juliet. Appreciated. :) gw
Ermine Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 4:50 PM
Gershon! Impossible not to credit your goose bump inducing Sonnet. A masterpiece of taking us to the smoky setting, putting us in the soldier's boots. You show your acute talent here, Gershon. Gut wrenching stuff.
Wolf Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 5:45 PM
Whoa! Is that my poem you're writing about, praising it to the skies? Thank you, Sigrid. Hope the world will have fewer guts-wrenching moments this decade. Peace, Gershon
Hankins Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 9:05 PM
A beautiful tribute to those who have given their all. I've never been on a battlefield, but I've seen this scene on the screen many times. Well-written, my friend.
Wolf Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 5:43 PM
The screen is more poignant than the battlefield, the grind of which lacks perspective. The screen provides it. ~ gw
Seeker Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 8:05 PM
To those who have given their today, for our tomorrow
Wolf Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 5:21 PM
Thank you for your on-point bullseye of a comment, Seeker. Peace, Gershon
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