A Moment of Reprieve

it seemed
his pretentious gibberish
would never end
and then 
out of nowhere
emerged
the most blessed
awkward
silence



AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 8:48 PM
Good luck in contest. Much said in few words. Like it!
Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 9:18 PM
Thank you, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 1:32 AM
It is such a reverse oxymoronic epigram to me, in my mind's eye right now. Well written, and pretentious gibberish is delightful. One word we hear, but many do not know what it means. The other we do not ever hear any more. I am going to write a poem using Gibberish. Thank you, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 8:23 AM
To me anything said in a pretentious manner, is utter gibberish and would be best left unsaid. Looking forward to reading your poem with the word gibberish.
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Love this, Line. And these epigrams are so enjoyable to see.
Gauthier Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 7:36 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Nicely written!
Gauthier Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 1:16 PM
Thank you, Kim. Much appreciated.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 8:35 AM
I like the humour in this one.
Gauthier Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 9:07 AM
Thanks for your visit, Richard. Much appreciated.
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