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A Moment of Passion

I love you my darling with all my heart Wonder how many times that's been said At the moment of passion when love bursts forth Two hearts intertwine, passions fed That moment of bliss, the follow up kiss Is there anything else that compares With this overpowering lust and desire Extreme pleasure of that moment shared Feeling great passion rising within me As the words start to form on my screen Passionate love words describing my feelings As you emit tiny pleasurable screams If a Heaven exists, then this must be it Nothing has ever equaled this pleasure To bottle this feeling and sell it to all Would guaranty success beyond measure I love you my darling with all my heart Wonder how many times that's been said At that moment of passion when love bursts forth Two hearts intertwine, passions fed © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 2/25/2014 3:08:00 PM
Wow. A man in love indeed
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/25/2014 7:07:00 PM
You're never too old!!! Cheers, Jack
Date: 2/25/2014 2:14:00 PM
OH DEAR ME!!!!!!!!!! This write is SIZZLING...Jack!!!! Perhaps the fire extinguisher might come in handy! ;) There you go with another beauty...Hugs
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/25/2014 7:05:00 PM
I have no idea what's gotten into me!!! LOL Love ya Queenie... Kenny XOXOX
Date: 2/25/2014 10:56:00 AM
- A love so great and true - a romantic and beautiful poem, Jack. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/25/2014 7:06:00 PM
Thank you sweet lady! Love from Canada... Jack XOXOX
Date: 2/25/2014 9:04:00 AM
Oh! Oh! A bit to fiery for younger Dragon ears so left out the intertwining screams. He thinks it's a good well wish from you. Beautifully, written (by the way). It made him smile. Grandpa Troll says Dragon colds only last about 12 hours before his flames burn them out! Thank Goodness! For he's quite a big baby, you know! And his cave is getting a bit hot! Had to stick his head toward the open door! And brought down his temperature by turning on the ceiling fire extinguishers! Clever... I was!
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Date: 2/25/2014 9:10:00 AM
This old dude still got it eh! Dragon would do well to read my words methinks! XOXOXOX
Date: 2/25/2014 8:40:00 AM
You are burning up the screen with this one Jack. It's good to know I still have many more years of passionate thinking to look forward to.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/25/2014 8:53:00 AM
The old dog's still got it, eh! See... age is only a number! LOL Cheers my friend!
Date: 2/25/2014 8:19:00 AM
Very passionate work..Sara
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/25/2014 8:28:00 AM
Been in this mood lately... must be age! LOL Huggsies, Jack XOX
Date: 2/25/2014 7:56:00 AM
Those words are key words in any relationship, must be the greatest words ever said, at least the greatest, pleasurable words of pure delight and love ever said! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/25/2014 8:00:00 AM
ROTFLMAO!!! They did it to me again, sweetie! This was obviously meant for AiyaH below! Not to say that I don't love you Russell! LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/25/2014 7:57:00 AM
You are very sweet, dear friend!!! Thank you a bunch... loving hugs always! XOXOX
Date: 2/25/2014 7:29:00 AM
very passionate lines...full of love and burning moments with someone we love....what a pleasurable piece for this morn!...thank you for sharing..^__^ oxox
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/25/2014 7:58:00 AM
You are very sweet, dear friend!!! Thank you a bunch... loving hugs always! XOXOX

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