Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

A Moment of Passion

I love you my darling with all my heart
Wonder how many times that's been said
At the moment of passion when love bursts forth
Two hearts intertwine, passions fed

That moment of bliss, the follow up kiss
Is there anything else that compares
With this overpowering lust and desire
Extreme pleasure of that moment shared

Feeling great passion rising within me
As the words start to form on my screen
Passionate love words describing my feelings
As you emit tiny pleasurable screams

If a Heaven exists, then this must be it
Nothing has ever equaled this pleasure
To bottle this feeling and sell it to all
Would guaranty success beyond measure

I love you my darling with all my heart
Wonder how many times that's been said
At that moment of passion when love bursts forth
Two hearts intertwine, passions fed

© Jack Ellison 2014

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Sizwe Hlabisa February 25, 2014 at 3:08 PM Wow. A man in love indeed Jack Ellison February 25, 2014 at 7:07 PM You're never too old!!! Cheers, Jack

Eileen Manassian February 25, 2014 at 2:14 PM OH DEAR ME!!!!!!!!!! This write is SIZZLING...Jack!!!! Perhaps the fire extinguisher might come in handy! ;) There you go with another beauty...Hugs Jack Ellison February 25, 2014 at 7:05 PM I have no idea what's gotten into me!!! LOL Love ya Queenie... Kenny XOXOX

Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2014 at 10:56 AM - A love so great and true - a romantic and beautiful poem, Jack. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Jack Ellison February 25, 2014 at 7:06 PM Thank you sweet lady! Love from Canada... Jack XOXOX

Carol Eastman February 25, 2014 at 9:04 AM Oh! Oh! A bit to fiery for younger Dragon ears so left out the intertwining screams. He thinks it's a good well wish from you. Beautifully, written (by the way). It made him smile. Grandpa Troll says Dragon colds only last about 12 hours before his flames burn them out! Thank Goodness! For he's quite a big baby, you know! And his cave is getting a bit hot! Had to stick his head toward the open door! And brought down his temperature by turning on the ceiling fire extinguishers! Clever... I was! Jack Ellison February 25, 2014 at 9:10 AM This old dude still got it eh! Dragon would do well to read my words methinks! XOXOXOX

Richard Lamoureux February 25, 2014 at 8:40 AM You are burning up the screen with this one Jack. It's good to know I still have many more years of passionate thinking to look forward to. Jack Ellison February 25, 2014 at 8:53 AM The old dog's still got it, eh! See... age is only a number! LOL Cheers my friend!

Sara Kendrick February 25, 2014 at 8:19 AM Very passionate work..Sara Jack Ellison February 25, 2014 at 8:28 AM Been in this mood lately... must be age! LOL Huggsies, Jack XOX

Russell Sivey February 25, 2014 at 7:56 AM Those words are key words in any relationship, must be the greatest words ever said, at least the greatest, pleasurable words of pure delight and love ever said! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!! Jack Ellison February 25, 2014 at 8:00 AM ROTFLMAO!!! They did it to me again, sweetie! This was obviously meant for AiyaH below! Not to say that I don't love you Russell! LOL Jack Ellison February 25, 2014 at 7:57 AM You are very sweet, dear friend!!! Thank you a bunch... loving hugs always! XOXOX

Aiyah Torres February 25, 2014 at 7:29 AM very passionate lines...full of love and burning moments with someone we love....what a pleasurable piece for this morn!...thank you for sharing..^__^ oxox Jack Ellison February 25, 2014 at 7:58 AM You are very sweet, dear friend!!! Thank you a bunch... loving hugs always! XOXOX