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A Moment In Time

A moment in time 
A feeling sublime
A person you barely know
Takes on a lovely glow

The two of you embrace
You sense a state of grace
Nothing is withheld
The two of you just meld

Something you’ve never felt
Into each other you melt
Thoughts can not relate
Is this my soulmate

Is this hug too long
Could this be wrong
I have to let go
Will I ever know

Did they feel the same
Should I feel shame
It had to happen sometime
Are we the perfect rhyme
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M  Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 8:15 AM
That's bill and Sara's love story right there...the perfect rhyme!! Debx
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 5:04 PM
ahh, those silent questions that run through one's mind when caught in the throes of love. just fyi, we are the perfect rhyme :-) hugs, me
Narain Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 10:50 AM
Lovely poem. You and Sara make a perfect couple.
George Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 6:27 AM
Hi Bill, Certainly you and Sara make the perfect rhyme. At times, I feel jealous of you.
Rolland Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 10:46 PM
nice poem, some moments are to be kept, and perduring
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