Constance La France Poet Etheree

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Poetry/Etheree/a moment in time
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Written, April 08, 2025
For the International Contest, Etheree 
Sponsor, Ink Empress, Judged 04/17/2025

Second Place

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a moment in time

day
begins
with snow fall
and  winds blowing
spinning and swirling
I turn on the fireplace
and make a cup of coffee
and settle in with my blanket
as I snuggle in kitty comes too
on a table is my cell and laptop
but first I the watch television news
I sit quietly sipping coffee
now I am informed turn it off
my kitty cat wants some pets
her purrs are so calming
I check my cell phone
check my laptop
my eyes close
need nap
first

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Paula Goldsmith April 19, 2025 at 11:40 AM Congratulations on your win. What a Lovely picture you have painted with your words. A nap sounds great to me. Happy Easter... Have a blessed day with your win................ Constance La France April 23, 2025 at 4:26 AM Paula, thank you for the congratulations, and comment, blessings ~

thriveni c mysore April 18, 2025 at 4:09 AM quiet serene dreamy life. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!! Constance La France April 23, 2025 at 4:27 AM thriveni, thank you for the comment and congratulations, blessings ~

Ink Empress April 17, 2025 at 1:39 PM Dear Constance, This is such a sincere write, and i can see youv found a new kitty now, and i hope kitty is keeping you warm too, i hope you get your kitty cat, some pets too, i know you will, as you are a loving cat mama, would love to see your kitty! how effortlessly youv painted imagery too here! Thank you for supporting my contests, congratulations on your win! Sending you light always Constance La France April 23, 2025 at 4:29 AM Ink, thank you for the contest and my placement and for the compliment, comment. I love my new kitty, Bella, I will try to get a pic of her posted to poetrysoup. Blessings ~

Barthwell Farmer April 8, 2025 at 2:04 PM Cozy vibes after the first four lines that sit on top of the "I turn on the fireplace", I like the change of action seemingly without there being a change of pace in terms of what's leisurely observed from the same setting, watching the chilly weather from rooms warming up. The organic structure is nicely ambiance-inducing for sleep with its descriptive images adrift just right. Constance La France April 9, 2025 at 5:31 AM Barthwell, thank you so much for the nice comment, blessings ~

CayCay Godwin April 8, 2025 at 1:32 PM I was right there with you and feel very much as though you did, in fact, write about you. I enjoyed our time by the fireplace one can 'turn on.' I know they exist, have for a long time, yet such seems 'off' to me. A me thing. CayCay Constance La France April 9, 2025 at 5:34 AM CayCay, thank you so much for the comment, yes I have an electric fireplace, one reason is risk of fire in an old building, my parent had a wood fireplace, I loved it, the smell and crackling, but oh what a mess to clean up, how did that end up being my job, lol, blessings ~