Get Your Premium Membership

A Moment Frozen in Time

Moments come and moments go as time keeps marching on; hold me now and kiss me slow ‘fore sunlight breaks with morning dawn, and wills this precious moment gone. May 5, 2025

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/11/2025 10:04:00 AM
Ahhh so romantic. Congrats
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 5/11/2025 10:16:00 AM
Thak you so much, Andrea.
Date: 5/9/2025 5:41:00 PM
As moments linger, they touch the heart, and that's truly enough my sweet friend. I sense you're holding them so close-- never letting go. This is beautiful, tender and romantic. Sending hugs along the wind. ~ Brandy
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 5/10/2025 4:10:00 AM
Thank you for sharing, Brandy. I always hold my precious moments close and hope they will never end. Warm hugs, John
Date: 5/9/2025 12:16:00 PM
So very beautiful John…Debx
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 5/10/2025 3:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, Deb, I appreciate it. Hugs, John
Date: 5/5/2025 9:53:00 AM
Wouldn't be great if those moments lasted a lifetime John. All we can do is try and relive them as often as we can. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 5/5/2025 3:55:00 PM
Like Lin said, the memories of the moments do last a lifetime, and I recall the moments again and again. I hope all is well with you and yours. John
Date: 5/5/2025 4:38:00 AM
Sweetly romantic quintain John. The captcha is kss
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 5/5/2025 3:33:00 PM
An appropriate captcha code for this poem. Thanks for stopping by Tom, I appreciate it.
Date: 5/5/2025 3:20:00 AM
It would be amazing if we could hold onto those special moments, John. But we have them saved in our memories.
Login to Reply
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 5/5/2025 3:30:00 PM
Ah yes, I have many such moments stored in my memory. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Lin, I appreciate it. Hope all is well in NOLA.

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry