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A Moment

Capture the moment Silver strands and glass green waves Bathe ivory shore For Raul's contest

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/5/2010 12:04:00 PM

Your 2nd & 3rd lines are especially beautiful :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/4/2010 8:33:00 AM

Beautiful image, Barbara. That's how I see the ocean, too. Best wishes for success in the contest! Happy Easter, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2010 7:59:00 AM

Still a beaut. Have a nice Easter.

Date: 3/31/2010 12:39:00 PM

Nice use of imagery. I like the peaceful feel of this poem. Thank you for sharing it. Happy Easter! Karen

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/30/2010 5:23:00 AM

And the moment frozen in words stays a jewel on the eye. One love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/29/2010 4:35:00 PM

Haven't looked that the new contest but this should do well..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 3/26/2010 7:11:00 PM

If I could share what this poems reflection has ment to me...well, you have with out a doubt, expressed it in so little words ! awesome write dear poet ! james

Colleen Bono

Date: 3/26/2010 7:01:00 PM

Short sweet and to the point.I like it.Hope all is well with you.

John Freeman

Date: 3/26/2010 11:20:00 AM

Everyone of these Haikus deserve to be #1 Barbara. I would be hard pressed to pick just one. Smile. Agape, Moses

Mitch White

Date: 3/26/2010 8:57:00 AM

Very mellow, serene- Best of luck in this awesome contest

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2010 7:01:00 AM

A moment is all it takes to view a second of beauty.good one

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 3/25/2010 6:51:00 PM

Barbara~ Very very nice I really enjoyed this good luck in the contest! Laura :)

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 3/25/2010 4:59:00 PM

very nice and good luck in the contest faleshia

John Freeman

Date: 3/25/2010 4:58:00 PM

Your Haika is a gem Barbara, Beautiful picture your words paint. You go Girl. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/25/2010 4:34:00 PM

Oh, I like this one, Barbara! Nicely done...you captured the moment beautifully! :)