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A Moment

Capture the moment Silver strands and glass green waves Bathe ivory shore For Raul's contest

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Date: 4/5/2010 12:04:00 PM
Your 2nd & 3rd lines are especially beautiful :)
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Date: 4/4/2010 8:33:00 AM
Beautiful image, Barbara. That's how I see the ocean, too. Best wishes for success in the contest! Happy Easter, Carolyn
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Date: 4/4/2010 7:59:00 AM
Still a beaut. Have a nice Easter.
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Date: 3/31/2010 12:39:00 PM
Nice use of imagery. I like the peaceful feel of this poem. Thank you for sharing it. Happy Easter! Karen
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Date: 3/30/2010 5:23:00 AM
And the moment frozen in words stays a jewel on the eye. One love
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Date: 3/29/2010 4:35:00 PM
Haven't looked that the new contest but this should do well..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/26/2010 7:11:00 PM
If I could share what this poems reflection has ment to me...well, you have with out a doubt, expressed it in so little words ! awesome write dear poet ! james
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Date: 3/26/2010 7:01:00 PM
Short sweet and to the point.I like it.Hope all is well with you.
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Date: 3/26/2010 11:20:00 AM
Everyone of these Haikus deserve to be #1 Barbara. I would be hard pressed to pick just one. Smile. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/26/2010 8:57:00 AM
Very mellow, serene- Best of luck in this awesome contest
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Date: 3/26/2010 7:01:00 AM
A moment is all it takes to view a second of beauty.good one
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Date: 3/25/2010 6:51:00 PM
Barbara~ Very very nice I really enjoyed this good luck in the contest! Laura :)
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Date: 3/25/2010 4:59:00 PM
very nice and good luck in the contest faleshia
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Date: 3/25/2010 4:58:00 PM
Your Haika is a gem Barbara, Beautiful picture your words paint. You go Girl. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/25/2010 4:34:00 PM
Oh, I like this one, Barbara! Nicely done...you captured the moment beautifully! :)
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