'a Mold That Fits'

that day my smile sucked you in, to places where things crawl because they are too tall to walk and yet you stood up, you stood out not twisted, like you always belonged like that space was carved with you in mind the mold that fits the one thing that change form and yet it stays the same the comfort the easiness pure joy from that day it still remains a mystery whose plot it was to make me smile who wanted us to meet it can never be this easy to like something so quickly to feel like you've come home even though you never left still feeling that day still feel you standing tall as if the mold was made for you...
12/05/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Foulk Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 8:41 PM
a great piece you created, well written.
Falotico Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 4:47 AM
I love the feeling from this write, I had to read it more then once and each time the feelings got warmer.. I glad you treasure this moment and special person who has inspired this... with Love across the big puddle...Michael
Delacroix Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 8:42 PM
Beautiful write and dedication to someone special, Wilma! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind words on my poem. Caroline.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 8:41 PM
Wishing u a vibrant weekend of creativity Wilma my friend.. enjoy ..luv..
A   Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 8:29 PM
very charming wilma,, sweet... enjoyed,, the class of mold,,, with out the mark,,, take care,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 8:24 PM
this is a very imaginative piece, Wilma, on how you felt about this person. I really enjoyed this one. Awesome!
Sweetheart Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 5:27 PM
So nice when two fit into one mold Wilma as u have described in this piece luv.. I luv that feeling of my counterpart being right next to me always.. elegant thoughts ...
Onclaud Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 10:40 AM
awwwh, a validation of love's compatibility! stunning piece laced with vivid images :) huggs, nette
Devonshire Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 8:56 AM
Dear Wilma, it is quite a blessing to find womeone who "fits" together so well with you. I think it is God who blesses us with relationships like this. Had big smiles reading this! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 7:43 AM
Excellent poetic verses... what a fine expression to feel like you have come home even though you never left. an expression of oneness, Wilma
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May 12, 2011 at 7:20 AM
Well Wilma this must go to my Favs.EXCELLENT!
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