'a Mold That Fits'

that day my smile sucked you in, to places where things crawl because they are too tall to walk and yet you stood up, you stood out not twisted, like you always belonged like that space was carved with you in mind the mold that fits the one thing that change form and yet it stays the same the comfort the easiness pure joy from that day it still remains a mystery whose plot it was to make me smile who wanted us to meet it can never be this easy to like something so quickly to feel like you've come home even though you never left still feeling that day still feel you standing tall as if the mold was made for you...
12/05/2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/14/2011 8:41:00 PM
a great piece you created, well written.
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Date: 5/14/2011 4:47:00 AM
I love the feeling from this write, I had to read it more then once and each time the feelings got warmer.. I glad you treasure this moment and special person who has inspired this... with Love across the big puddle...Michael
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Date: 5/13/2011 8:42:00 PM
Beautiful write and dedication to someone special, Wilma! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind words on my poem. Caroline.
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Date: 5/13/2011 8:41:00 PM
Wishing u a vibrant weekend of creativity Wilma my friend.. enjoy ..luv..
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Date: 5/13/2011 8:29:00 PM
very charming wilma,, sweet... enjoyed,, the class of mold,,, with out the mark,,, take care,..p.d.
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Date: 5/12/2011 8:24:00 PM
this is a very imaginative piece, Wilma, on how you felt about this person. I really enjoyed this one. Awesome!
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Date: 5/12/2011 5:27:00 PM
So nice when two fit into one mold Wilma as u have described in this piece luv.. I luv that feeling of my counterpart being right next to me always.. elegant thoughts ...
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Date: 5/12/2011 10:40:00 AM
awwwh, a validation of love's compatibility! stunning piece laced with vivid images :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/12/2011 8:56:00 AM
Dear Wilma, it is quite a blessing to find womeone who "fits" together so well with you. I think it is God who blesses us with relationships like this. Had big smiles reading this! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:43:00 AM
Excellent poetic verses... what a fine expression to feel like you have come home even though you never left. an expression of oneness, Wilma
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:20:00 AM
Well Wilma this must go to my Favs.EXCELLENT!
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