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November- 28- 2023
First Verse is a Charm Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Jaymee Thomas

 

A Misty Dawn

Against the hazy sky Mountains, seen grotesque Frightening monsters, poking out Here, there and all around In the glinting darkness The ravine, like a mythical snake Gapes its mouth Mist hovers, Spider webs hang As dew spangled veils The leaves are tears stained By the Night’s frozen grief In stealthy steps, With the jingle of anklets, The wind comes to shake off the drops And down they drip one by one As the grass below shiver At the sudden shock. The leaves, rid of the load, flutter- Faint stir of life! From a distant habitation The rooster in sharp notes Sounds the siren The East bleeds As shafts of gold cuts through her breast Darkness recedes, Birds begin to chirp. Slowly, Slowly, parting curtains The day emerges Like a lazy boy Disinclined to be roused from sleep _______________________________ ~ Placed Third~ Your Option Poetry Contest Sponsor- Brian Strand
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December 3, 2023 at 1:37 PM
I thought I would check out your first poem... what a wonderful introduction to poetry soup it was for you...
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February 6, 2023 at 11:37 AM
Way to go in Brian's contest. Your name is on the list of winners'. Wave the banner high. Thanks for sharing this work. Sara
Fowler Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 6:32 AM
This is terrific Valsa. Very visually stimulating images here. Congratulations on your win! :)
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June 29, 2022 at 8:19 AM
Your first poem here is a beauty! Love: Spider webs hang As dew spangled veils
Brul Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 9:22 AM
A spellbinding first post. Magical in every detail.Superb write from a superb pen.
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December 15, 2021 at 4:49 AM
Every detail a gem through your gifted pen my friend. I saw and heard the morning awakening. A superb write.
George Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 11:34 PM
I feel thrilled at the thought that you could see that dawn awakening. Thanks a lot Vijay....
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December 2, 2021 at 7:00 PM
LOve your 'Misty Dawn' Valsa, Came to read your first post.
George Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 8:18 PM
Thanks a lot harry ! Your endorsement means much to me.
Goff Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 5:07 PM
Awesome Valsa! I wanted to keep it going! With nature all around unfolding, like the Bumblebee's wings drying and flying! Exceptional! james
George Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 7:49 PM
James, so happy for your kind visit to my page. Your beautiful comments on my poems are much appreciated. Stay blessed dear friend ! Love and Regards!
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November 26, 2021 at 9:14 AM
Well done Valsa for your masterly strokes depicting nature in its wild context. Pity few read this poem.
George Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 7:46 PM
Glad you could find beauty in these lines. I know you too are an ardent lover of Nature as I am ! Yes, nature will look wonderful if we open our eyes ! Thank you Victor for your kind comment !
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November 9, 2021 at 1:56 PM
Your poetic nature in a so wonderful tune with Nature.. You paint meticulously landscapes and portraits and put a lot of Life into your expressive words.. I kept reading your beautiful rendition many a time.. so immense is my delight! Welcome to our path of poetry, Valsa! My deepest regards and blessings.
George Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 8:19 PM
Thanks a lot Besma for your uplifting words. You have made my day.... ! What a warm welcome you have extended and thanks a lot for the interest you have shown in my poems.
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