A Miserable Flying Bird

Mutant of human,
Whose view-less wings
Took him so high,that envisioned life
In whose, voice bird speaks:
What I was, not me today.
Serving to his hunger
Losing myself, to make him alive.
Wand I use of a witch,
Mind into a river switch.

Far out in the sky,
Entangled in solitude,
Lunacy,where, my ore smelt.
That now is a wild stream:
Roaring from the mountain
Flooding in its dry bed,
Desert where, my glacier
Smile of the sun engulf.

To sustain a life,
For no grains I find here
So I entreat you to dislocated
Wings to put back into human
To protect, from being
To be: a Dodo.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 5, 2013 at 9:13 AM
Hem. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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June 5, 2013 at 12:53 PM
Thanks a lot, well, I will. my sincere heart is attached, in love with words. if my words could meet the preferred criteria. many thanks again. sincerely Hem
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May 28, 2013 at 1:32 PM
Lots of underlying messages here. Great job, welcome to the soup.
Bastola Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 12:08 PM
Thank you very much hope, it would be enjoying being involved. will share our soups each other.
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May 28, 2013 at 2:40 AM
Hem, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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May 30, 2013 at 12:28 PM
Thanks, will read yours too.
Cee Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 12:04 AM
welcome to Psoup Hem... you have a good writing...---ELAI
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May 30, 2013 at 12:29 PM
If my words have caliber to express, thanks I am trying my best.
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