A Mirror is Sand and Water As

One
grain drops.
Time begins,
or keeps going—
it’s hard to tell which.
Necks pinch into purpose.
Pressure makes the moment's weight—
its glass throat narrows in, knowing:
the longer it holds, the less it means.
We reflect shapes only edges can name.
We reflect edges only shapes can name.
The longer it holds, the less it means—
its glass throat narrows in, knowing
pressure makes the moment's weight.
Necks pinch into purpose.
It’s hard to tell which.
It keeps going—
time begins.
Grains drop.
One.
One
eye blinks.
You were here—
then you weren’t. Dust
settles in the bowl
of what we almost kept.
Hands can learn from repeating.
As they grow, smoother, more resigned,
an hourglass flips with no permission.
No one votes on the descent of return.
No one votes on the return of descent.
An hourglass with no permission flips.
It just grows smoother, more resigned.
My hands learn from the repeat,
of what I almost keep,
settled in the bowl—
you are now dust.
You aren't here.
Eye blinks.
One.

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Date: 4/18/2025 4:07:00 AM
you designed a new form of Etheree! "We reflect shapes only edges can name. We reflect edges only shapes can name./ No one votes on the descent of return. No one votes on the return of descent." how much effort lies below this timely write to make it this flawless! amazing dear friend. title is tricky for sure. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 4/18/2025 4:32:00 AM
I so appreciate your comments. I know my work isn't everyone's cup of tea or shot of whiskey, but she's mine and I adore her. Thank you again for showing it some attention. I hope you have a magical weekend :)
Date: 4/17/2025 1:33:00 PM
Dear jaymee, Clever write on time and fleeting nature of all and how things change, and shift! Youv gone for the hourglass and shows through your words, how with each grain drop, and with time so much can be learned and more! I like how you did the mirror reflection, in each etheree too, something many might also appreciate! Thank you for joining my contest! Congratulations on your win
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 4/17/2025 3:48:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind words. I never tried this form before and it was so interesting with so many possibilities. Great prompt!
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