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Sept. 7- 2026

Let's Minichu on Colors of Autumn Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Mohan Chuthani


 

A Minichu on Autumn Hues

Autumn flies down on wings.
With a gamut of paints, turns green leaves into gold.
In joy, sings.

A true master-
With deft strokes, he changes the old.
Trickster.

On trees,
What hues unfold.
Wiz

Autumn flies down on wings.
With deft strokes, he changes the old.
Wiz
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Callus Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 1:49 AM
This is a delightful Minichu, Valsa, straight away attracting attention with a grand introductory stanza. ~ Best regards // paul
Poet Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 5:48 AM
Even short this piece conveys the surprise and beauty of nature's color changes in autumn, dear Valsa. While succinct, it's an evocative snippet of autumn's charm.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 1:29 PM
A fine fabulous autumnal colors poem wow. Enjoyed the refrain type in this form. Kudos! Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 5:17 PM
Those first lines sing…sing of Autumn!
DiMino Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 11:40 AM
"Autumn flies down on wings. With a gamut of paints, turns green leaves into gold." -- The omnipotent moment of Creation. Time stops, all aging stilled, Divine our capture. What we project sincerely from the celebrating heart, surpasses, outlives even the canvas -- a portrait essence gifted by the process to the soul of humanity. Lovely write my friend. Thank you for sharing.
Andresen Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 1:59 AM
- I love painting autumn on canvas, Valsa :) - A beautiful poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Griffiths Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 12:54 AM
This is really cool! Thank you for introducing me to the minichu form and the word deft, which I've read in the dictionary means quick and neatly skilful. Really emphasises that he is "a true master"! I also like how he has the complete range ("gamut") of colours. This shows how he has a lot to choose from and chooses in a magical way, as a wizard does -- very whimsical and well written!
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