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A Mind Made Up

A Mind Made Up

What are you looking  for
Knocking on my door
Your heart to be returned
Now that I am spurned

With pleasure it is yours
Slammed shut are the doors
Take it in your hand
And try to understand

It’s no good coming back
When it’s love for me you lack
All my trust in you is gone
Since you found another one

No matter what you say
There will never be a way
You can talk until your blue
My love has gone for you

So take your heart and go away
And forever from me stay
No more knocking on my door
I’m not what you’re looking for.

R.D.Seal.     25 Jan 2013

Copyright © Richard D Seal | Year Posted 2013

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Verlecia Fields Date: 4/24/2017 1:32:00 PM the poem hit me right in the heart - as if it was being said to me - painful Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 9/7/2013 2:30:00 PM Had to come back and read this one thanks to Licia's write!!!! Very passionate piece...Yes, it takes passion to be angry...and anger is just disappointed love....take care, Mr Seal Login to Reply Richard D Seal Date: 9/7/2013 7:24:00 PM You hit the nail on the head there Mrs Ghali. Thanks for the return visit

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/2/2013 12:45:00 AM ON tihs exact same poem exactly a month ago, I wrote that I could not find a new poem to comment to. How funny I ended up at the same place saying it again as i did on July 1! I sure enjoyed the comment you left me on that July 1 comment! Thanks for all your attention to my poetry and to others'! Login to Reply Richard D Seal Date: 8/2/2013 5:30:00 AM You're certainly a creature of habit Petal lol see you around the 1/2 of September lol, I've become a comment junkie haha,

Delysia Hendricks Date: 7/21/2013 10:43:00 AM Can you unmake your mind up? I still care deeply about you. lol. Nice write, Richard. You're de man. Licia :-) Login to Reply Richard D Seal Date: 8/2/2013 5:24:00 AM Lol, You know me hinges are rusted solid Licia, :)though you can be sure I too care deeply, and if you ever need me, go to the window for any discourse required hahaha

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/1/2013 8:54:00 PM hmmm, I wonder if I can find any new poem of yours. Have I seen them all? I remember this one too. You have so many good ideas, I sure hope to see many new posts from you. Login to Reply Richard D Seal Date: 7/3/2013 2:02:00 PM Hiya Petal, The problem is I spend so much time commenting on the prolific writers, erm like you lol

Timothy Hicks Date: 4/26/2013 3:04:00 PM The finality of this is strong. I guess it's all in the situation you're in, but sometimes forgiveness can't be so easily received. Sometimes you just have to move on. Really well written piece, Richard. And I hope she'll be able to move on as well! Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 4/24/2013 11:16:00 PM Wow...good for you. But then again...sometimes you need to forgive and remember that anyone can fall. No one is infallable, Richard. Hugs. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/25/2013 3:22:00 PM I enjoyed reading this one. It reminded me of the subject of some old rock songs I used to listen to such as that one that goes: I hear you knocking but you can't come in!! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/21/2013 6:46:00 PM wow Richard, I guess you have made up your mind... it's hard to hear someone go on and on, when all trust is broken. I have a bad boyfriend, who knocks on my door...i wish I had the nerve to turn away and not listen... always~ Linda Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 3/17/2013 11:09:00 AM Richard; Congratulations on getting featured. This is a great poem. When something is gone - it's gone. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 3/3/2013 8:29:00 PM Lol!!! Fabulous!!! Very good one !! :) so true so true... Big huggsss deb Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 2/18/2013 11:08:00 PM Sad but firm. Welcome Richard to our corner. I think you will like it here. Keep up the good work. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce Login to Reply