A Mild Observation

A scar in the seasoned wood
Stigma hereby,
Chaotic sound’s running nearly
Which dancing with the peculiar breeze
Plea to the timbre,
Plea to the chaos,
Signs are like tragedy, as they're multiethnic; 
Mooniest doors reverberate the breeze
Slowly, softly or gently
They caress with smoothness 
Shy appearance or shameless 
Beneath the doors,
A black floor’s waiting 
He's making a hush sound
Oh! What a regret!
What a feeling of unavoidable negligence! 
Observer is only the scared seasoned wood.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Agustin Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 4:19 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this wisdom of yours, exposing grim reality, expressed in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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