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A Midnight Lesson

A dark cloud dashed in and shrouded the dozing moon; A gusty wind thudded the door closed; clock struck noon; A jackal howled from the thicket, behind my room; And flapped in a gross looking bat right from the doom. “Hail!” screamed a spider from a web above my bed; A cockroach splattered his wings right below my head; The bat licks his lips, popped out his blazing eyes, "Clicked" and thundered me never, ever to tell lies. *A 5th Place* in the following contest (judged on Nov. 5, 2020) Oct. 30, 2020: 8 Lines of Spooky Rhyme Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitcin

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Date: 11/11/2020 12:27:00 PM
Love this Newton! Our consciences certainly do have ways of bringing us up short! Congratulations on your winning placement! It is definitely eerie! Love the way you set the scene.
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Date: 11/11/2020 6:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam, for this impressively great comment and congratulations!!
Date: 11/6/2020 12:05:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great win in this spooky contest, Newton :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/6/2020 4:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for your kind words!!
Date: 11/6/2020 10:53:00 AM
Newton, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this chilling poem_ Constance
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Date: 11/6/2020 4:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance, for this great comment!!
Date: 11/5/2020 2:05:00 PM
Newton, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky and creative poem!
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Date: 11/5/2020 3:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tania, for the lovely comment!!
Date: 11/2/2020 4:36:00 AM
Scary indeed! We don’t need a man to set us straight. Natural things, in unsettling state can bring us to our knees or drive us mad.
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Date: 11/2/2020 5:31:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim, for this immensely great comment!!
Date: 11/1/2020 9:46:00 AM
GREAT lines. Loved the one on the cockroach!! I see a win with this one!!
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Date: 11/1/2020 2:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this immensely great comment!!
Date: 10/30/2020 1:01:00 PM
- Really spooky, Newton - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2020 2:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this sweet comment!!

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