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A Mid-Summer Cosmic Awareness Cry

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A Mid-Summer Cosmic Awareness Cry

 

The blue sky’s white clouds, once happy, became weary;

Tears flowed slowly down until a blinking loud outburst occurred:-

 

Following this occurrence, cloud teardrops began to fall faster;

And later, it was like those clouds’ eyes became turned facets:-

 

After a while, these flowing tears gradually came to a dampening halt;

Light blue sky, white clouds, and a brighter sun, all made their return:-

 

Wow! On this beautiful summer day, nature canvassed a streaming

Equally as beautiful as were the past days of the revered spring rains.

 

Such amazing awareness it is, how nature canvases the oneness 

Of summer and spring’s allegorical messaging of resurrection. 

 
A Mid-Summer Cosmic Awareness Cry The blue sky’s white clouds, once happy, became weary; Tears flowed slowly down until a blinking loud outburst occurred:- Following this occurrence, cloud teardrops began to fall faster; And later, it was like those clouds’ eyes became turned facets:- After a while, these flowing tears gradually came to a dampening halt; Light blue sky, white clouds, and a brighter sun, all made their return:- Wow! On this beautiful summer day, nature canvassed a streaming Equally as beautiful as were the past days of the revered spring rains. Such amazing awareness it is, how nature canvases the oneness Of summer and spring’s allegorical messaging of resurrection.

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