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A Mid-December Musing

a Santa suit-red snowflake-white and pine tree-green . . . my rainbow glistens Like a rainbow after rain, the colors of the Yuletide season appear for many of us to warm our souls in the cold of winter. This year my yultide rainbow began to glisten brightly right before Thanksgiving Day when snow swirled down rather unwelcomingly, for my son and his family from Oregon were driving in to see us at that time. No sooner had he arrived when he turned around and left, just one day after our small family feast at a buffet restaurant. How lovely that time was though -the food, the banter, and the after-dinner games. After that brief time with my son's family, I spent the next few weeks mailing off Christmas cards and shopping for gifts, etc. Today I take note that the "big day" is exactly one week away. However, I will not have my son with me, for he lives too far from us, and his visits are infrequent. Consequently, getting together my children and their family members at one time and place is a very special and rare occasion. As rare as seeing a double rainbow! After New Year's Day, I will return to work, my small vacation time expired. Valentine's Day, St. Patrick's Day and Easter, Tax day!! Then many birthdays, anniversaries, my mid-summer one-week break, and Halloween will lead me back again to the time of Thanksgiving. I look forward eagerly to them all; then I turn around, and they are gone. . .gone as swiftly as those two days that passed when I got to be with my son at my last Thanksgiving time. Days, weeks, months, seasons, years. . . they come and they go - endlessly revolving through the four seasons of the lives of all humanity. As I keep marking off my calendar, I see those celebrations as the evanescent rainbows of my life and also the greatest paradox of life! The longer we live and relish life, the closer we come to its end. seasons of rainbows in a century will be . . . all but forgotten Dec. 18, 2019 for Caren Krutsinger's December Or January Haibun Contest Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/29/2019 4:27:00 PM
Andrea congrats on getting HM!;)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/29/2019 4:33:00 PM
whooptie doo hahaha
Date: 12/24/2019 8:00:00 PM
We do count down the years. I felt the longing in your words. I like the Haibun form and hope to try it more. Have a very Merry Christmas and thank you for the gift of your poetry. Cheers, SuZ
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Date: 12/23/2019 8:22:00 PM
I remember Thanksgivings of the past and miss my family members who have departed this mortal coil. I sometimes wonder about an after life. We do have that in the Jewish tradition - it is called the World To Come! Great haibun Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/21/2019 1:14:00 PM
Continue to flourish in the coming year, Oh! Prolific one!
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Date: 12/20/2019 11:57:00 AM
Sad but true, but we have the memories and the hope of another for many years. Blessings and happy holidays.
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Date: 12/19/2019 11:54:00 PM
I love it, Andrea, I like the way you made the time line. I too use to live in Oregon and I dearly miss it; it's so beautiful even in winter. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/19/2019 2:46:00 PM
So true, loved this one Andrea, you're right time goes so quickly especially as you get older. You have to enjoy life while you can. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 12/19/2019 8:47:00 AM
Uneasy human relations between two haikus - a bright and public one, and a stoic and personal. There is something metaphysical about it: a human life between birth and death. In my opinion, this is how a haibun should look like - a deep and a little distant.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/19/2019 12:33:00 PM
thanks for your detailed comment, Kurt. I don't often do this form, so I sure do hope it is an actual haibun.
Date: 12/19/2019 7:08:00 AM
Enjoyed this write, Andrea on true treasures of life--much depth in your ending. All the best.
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Date: 12/18/2019 4:00:00 PM
Cont- Is this for the"Haibun" contest? If it is you should do will in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-)
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Date: 12/18/2019 3:58:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, I really enjoyed your "December" musings. Spending quality time with family is so hard to do these days. That's why, like you expressed so well , we must cherish each moment with our loved ones. Because one never knows when their "rainbow" season will come to an end. I saw your heart in this write. It showed how much you love your family . My son is still young but I know one day he will find a wife and create his own family. Thanks for sharing such a touching and heartfelt write:-) Alexis
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/19/2019 12:34:00 PM
thanks so much, Alexis.
Date: 12/18/2019 3:55:00 PM
Well done Andrea. You are so correct. We all need to live like theres no tomorrow. Life goes by so quickly. Cherish everything we have. Thanks for sharing this
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